crazycarl024
Bluelighter
what's up bluelight... I've been on a little break from the blue for a bit. I used to read a lot of posts this summer, but school's been busy. Ever since i moved here.. i've been writing a lot. One night, i was tripping and for some reason though a lot of bluelight.. this is something i wrote later that night.
like a beautiful painting
cut apart into every individual dot
and these scattered across a grandter canvas
beautiful from afar
but we see between the strands
and only occasionaly do we stumble onto an electrifying explosion of color
and we can't stand but be awestruck
our feet knocked form beneath us
our world uncapped and turned back in the unveiled world that rivals before us
the power grips out.. what we know is released
the dark cape taken off
the peacefull city beneath shown
the glittering of the lights in the windows shine
out and about through the streets
the dark light shines
just a shadow of before
you have to give me a little leway because i haven't been writing that long
let me know what you guys think.. some critism would be phat
peace all,
carl
[This message has been edited by crazycarl024 (edited 10 November 2000).]
like a beautiful painting
cut apart into every individual dot
and these scattered across a grandter canvas
beautiful from afar
but we see between the strands
and only occasionaly do we stumble onto an electrifying explosion of color
and we can't stand but be awestruck
our feet knocked form beneath us
our world uncapped and turned back in the unveiled world that rivals before us
the power grips out.. what we know is released
the dark cape taken off
the peacefull city beneath shown
the glittering of the lights in the windows shine
out and about through the streets
the dark light shines
just a shadow of before
you have to give me a little leway because i haven't been writing that long
let me know what you guys think.. some critism would be phat
peace all,
carl
[This message has been edited by crazycarl024 (edited 10 November 2000).]
