Hey girl!

[Deleted member 10878]

Hey girl
You're amazing
I bet you didn't know that.
You flail your arms to the sky
with this passion like the sun
And yet, you always walk with your
head hung low.
Hey girl
You're beautiful
Everyone wants to be you
Your smile warms the world
with a glow that kindles all
And yet, you always walk
and your smile doesn't show.
You're so fucking special
I want to be you.
I want to crawl into your skin
And see what it's like to be you for a day.
Hey girl
You're fantastic
I bet you didn't imagine that
You're voice is sweet like an angel
filled with a sound like a seraphim
And yet, you always walk around
saying nothing at all.
Hey girl
I love you
I bet you couldn't guess that.
I am always trying to make you like me
but you never acknowledge me
And yet, I remain drawn to you
and never think about myself at all.
You're so fucking special
I want to be you.
I want to crawl into your skin
And see what it's like to be you for a day.
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AIM: MoondancerKat
Ever look for tomorrow?
Why not look for Today?
~me

 

[StormChild]

I like this.
But hey, you sound pretty special yourself!
Special enough to notice the people like her in the first place....

 

[Dagny]

Star... that was... I mean... please write more poetry. Absolutely beautiful. Beautifully written, beautifully thought out, this is really powerful girl.
dags