DigitalTweak
Bluelighter
- Joined
- Jun 3, 2001
- Messages
- 76
This is something i wrote and wanted to post it, feedback is welcome as i like opinions, i dont share much of my writting but what the hell why not so here it is:
fell down a hole in to eternal bliss, surrounded by an eternity of false purposse and empty meaning. This is my destiney in the clouds of endless hope broken by fate. Screnity found with a sudden end in sight yet out of reach. A creature of habbit, a change in reality. Running through theshadows of a twilight dream everything is the same yet everything has changed and will I remain, filled with the hopes and endless potential or will i crumble in to dust and blow away in the wind. Fragile with infanit strength of the mind. Makes me forget makes me imune. Despair the madding force pushing me back to yout reality and bare this poisen of knowledge you could never comprehend. Your reality built apon greed and power where i live each moment each hour. Questioning the insanitycast your judgements on me. Your fear has made me the focus. Pass me off with your incivilaty and never know for it is better that way, live for your dollars and forget your dreams filling the prisons and going def to the screams, knowing your right fromyour wrong never questioning. Keep your bigotry and worship your material wealth forget to be what you wanted to be and that isw why your are scared of me who truely is living to be free and happy by my own guidlines not societies.
fell down a hole in to eternal bliss, surrounded by an eternity of false purposse and empty meaning. This is my destiney in the clouds of endless hope broken by fate. Screnity found with a sudden end in sight yet out of reach. A creature of habbit, a change in reality. Running through theshadows of a twilight dream everything is the same yet everything has changed and will I remain, filled with the hopes and endless potential or will i crumble in to dust and blow away in the wind. Fragile with infanit strength of the mind. Makes me forget makes me imune. Despair the madding force pushing me back to yout reality and bare this poisen of knowledge you could never comprehend. Your reality built apon greed and power where i live each moment each hour. Questioning the insanitycast your judgements on me. Your fear has made me the focus. Pass me off with your incivilaty and never know for it is better that way, live for your dollars and forget your dreams filling the prisons and going def to the screams, knowing your right fromyour wrong never questioning. Keep your bigotry and worship your material wealth forget to be what you wanted to be and that isw why your are scared of me who truely is living to be free and happy by my own guidlines not societies.
I like this line especially.