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Here is there and there is here

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Just because im me
doesnt mean I cant feel it
just because its the only way you will see
doesnt make it right
But if its right by you
then I guess its ok
I will have to learn to live
because your slowly losing your ways
Whats wrong with me
why cant I make you see
is it the way I lose myself with you
or try and be myself with you
What cant you take from me
that I dont have to give
is that whats wrong here
or whats right with you
To do me wrong is to do me right
but it doesnt feel like this is right
whats wrong for me is right for you
and whats left of us is anybodys guess
Something disentegrated
like my heart, shattered like glass
but glass is see through
and I saw through you
Maybe its meant to be
as I raise my stakes and believe
nothing I cant achieve
with my heart and soul on show
One step backward, two steps forward
finally getting somewhere
realise I have been there all along
just kept deluding myself
But where is there,
think to myself, do I really care
if im here then I dont need to get there
so did I ever need to worry
Did I ever need to regret,
well whats done is done
and whats said has been said
everything came to an end
..like this
 
Something disentegrated
like my heart, shattered like glass
but glass is see through
and I saw through you
some of your most heartbreaking stuff to read, is also your finest. and this one was right up there with my favorites.
 
Thanx, is it strange that I write all of these things without ever really being in the situation which when I read it back it appears to come from and others seem to interpret it as coming from?
Ive never been in love or really had my heart broken but I seem to be able to write about both of them on a daily basis.
 
Ive never been in love or really had my heart broken but I seem to be able to write about both of them on a daily basis.
Then you truly have a gift for this stuff!! Your work is AMAZING, you've definitely become a favorite of mine!! :) It's hard to believe your words aren't written from experience, so much of it I have been able to relate to these past few weeks. The emotion you portray in your work is perfectly exact!! Thank you so much for sharing!!
I can't help but wonder what your work would be like if you were really going through these situations... WOW!! But I'm really glad your not!! :D
~icy
 
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