here i go

[beanpoophead]

Look at her
so beautiful
she might as well be dead
danced to dreams and make believe
that only seem to be half reality
and here she is
awake and cold
shaking in her night sweats
dreaming of dreams
when dreams are only what they seem
when they only come to be
for what dreams come to be
are what dreams are to me

and im lost
and im confused
and im trying to capture a thought
when my thoughts float above my head
teach me where to go - watch me fall
here I go...

 

[doof-kittie]

Look at her
so beautiful
she might as well be dead

For some reason, these lines completely take my vreath away. Im not sure how to describe how it makes me feel, but that last line is intense

 

[cherub]

I love this piece of work girl, very riveting and makes me think about some things in my own life.

excellenT!!!