Her Hand

[Belisarius]

Her Hand

I stride over the warm sand, her hand in mine.
Wave-salt kisses my lips, her hand in mine.

A clock ticks. In the west window is red sky.
Against her my body strives, her hand in mine.

Black clouds roll across the blue; a storm is nigh.
I quiver with leaves in iced wind, her hand in mine.

A star falls. Her ear catches a whispered wish.
In winter the Moon is high, her hand in mine.

I, her lover now old, wait for the forgotten void.
In memory, I sit beside her dying, her hand in mine.

 

[Cookiequeen]

wow, thats truely beautiful. I never usually come into this forum but after reading this I think I will now.You write beautifully.

 

[Belisarius]

Thank you.

 

[cherub]

gives me memory of old times.... true with the words above this is beautiful

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

This speaks to me of a timeless love, so elegantly written and yes so very beuatiful.

 

[the.stugots]

i really dig the gentle refrain
nice work

 

[RareForm]

pleasant, and hopeful.

 

[up all night]

This speaks to me of a timeless love, so elegantly written and yes so very beuatiful.

He said it best. Nice work.

 

[drEaMtiMe*@#]

this is such a touching and beautiful piece.

my favourite verse:

A star falls. Her ear catches a whispered wish.
In winter the Moon is high, her hand in mine.