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womanthatrolls

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There is an indentation just above your hip.
A line that runs down into your pants
that makes my fingers trace you
(i swear it is involuntary)

You are the kind of boy who makes
beneath breath sounds
as he fucks.

You are arched back longing
and wrap me in arms and mouths and tenderness
kind of coming.

you are hand on my face
sliding down sides
slipping off clothing
that dissapears
without us realizing.

we are intwined
in breath
and want
and each other.

You make me

shake a little

just before i shudder.

you smile into my
sweating
neck.

you kiss the line of pink that crawls up my cheeks
to meet the
almost black of my
almost wet hair.

We fall asleep.
we are messy
and locked
and
i
i am tucked in the small space
between your chin
and thigh.

it is curled up
smiling
love.

(bring your dark blue eyes
and half bitten lip over here

You make me whisper your name like a lyric)
 
Wow! Just wow... that is fantastically written. It flows flawlessly and is so full of intensity. Thankyou for posting that here!

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this was very very well written, love the way u put it together.

You are arched back longing
and wrap me in arms and mouths and tenderness
kind of coming.

you are hand on my face
sliding down sides
slipping off clothing
that dissapears
without us realizing.

...

and
i
i am tucked in the small space
between your chin
and thigh.
...

You make me whisper your name like a lyric)
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wow...

womanthatrolls said:

***********
You are the kind of boy who makes
beneath breath sounds
as he fucks.

*********
we are intwined
in breath
and want
and each other.

You make me

shake a little

just before i shudder.

you smile into my
sweating
neck.
Click to expand...

can i just say...WOW...i really loved reading this. the passion expressed is great! =D
 
wow.. my first time on this Words forum and i must say im blown away by my first read! that is absolutely beautiful. god i can feel your passion...

/me makes himself at home :-)
 
I was very impressed. This was extremely intense. Very descriptive, and I like how you spaced the words... it works beautifully. Very alluring, the way you write...

Damn... I hope a girl writes about me like this one day... :(
 
womanthatrolls said:
We fall asleep.
we are messy
and locked
and
i
i am tucked in the small space
between your chin
and thigh.

it is curled up
smiling
love.

(bring your dark blue eyes
and half bitten lip over here

You make me whisper your name like a lyric)
Click to expand...


WOW!!

Well written, very impressive... one of the best pieces I've read here in a while :)

Loved the way it's set out. I want to quote the lot!!

=D
 
The title is fucking brilliant.

You're one of the few who can describe that moment with words, and congrats on feeling that moment in the first place. ;)
 
wow is the word. i really like this piece - it manages to be intensely erotic without being overly graphic - i find this subtlety really makes a (good!) difference to works like this.

what raz said about the paragraphs too - it makes me feel a certain way about it, but i can't put it into words atm, i'll try to figure it out later :)
 
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