"Hair-Trigger" (lyrics--abbreviated version)

[OrLackThereof]

Striking a delicate balance,
We were dancing on a pin.
You brought your needles and I brought my evils,
And the fire raged within.
My words were too ballistic.
My aim was a little off.
I hated me and so I hated you.
Pull the hammer and watch my pressure drop.

My hollow bones,
A perfect place to make your home.
Disease me from inside out.
Fill my heart with doubt.

As you atrophy what's left of me.

I was too weak to fly,
Too confused to stand in place.
Too scared to leave,
But too broken to stay,
Take a deep breath and blow me away.

Inhale, Inhale me.
As thin as air.
No longer there.


[This is the abbreviated version since it's written as lyrics, I thought it unnecessary to repeat chorus blocks, etc. Opinions welcome, good or bad.)

 

[panic in paradise]

OrLackThereOf
Too scared not to leave,
But too broken to stay,

i like it a lot, but made a suggestion to a correction.


lets hear you sing it!?
:D

 

[Raz]

I really like it as is....agree that it would be good to hear it!