habitual chaos

[lunaclo]

another maze, another page
draws me in
i may be wrong, but i never felt so strong
give me a lake and i'll swim
across
you learn to blend
habitual chaos
hyper bondage, fast parades
i need to stand where your soul cascades
give me
a sign
ill defined
aligned with you
never lost
you learn to blend
habitual chaos

 

[Queen Beat]

This had a beautiful flow - very smooth.

i need to stand where your soul cascades
I love that imagery...

 

[lunaclo]

thank you for your comments......that is my favorite line, too........this might actually be a song one day, it's so difficult to distinguish my writing as lyrics instead of poetry....this was my most successful attempt at writing in lyrical form.....i admire the hell out of songwriters now, what they do is very difficult for me to pull off.

 

[Miss_bhavior]

Wow. I love that so much it hurts inside.

 

[Kaolin]

aligned with you
never lost
I love it..