Habits

[3rd Realm]

It's the closest I'll ever get to having my lips set on fire
But without the passion and without the pain
Cause really it's all about how it feels when you breathe
It's something less beautiful
And a little more ugly
On that beaten path to conflagrant fixation
Something that ignites a hunger in you
So here's to bad habits you'll never be rid of
That take you, for a minute, to break free from what's bad
Inhale all that's impure and see how it feels in your lungs
Just don't burn your fingers trying to escape ...
So here's to bad habits
Here's to bad habits
I needed it more than you anyway

 

[RareForm]

This was pretty good, i liked it...

I hope to see more from you....

Thanks for sharing!

 

[neverwas]

awesome. you have a way with words

 

[cherub]

definately a good write,,,,, what is the old say" To live a healthy life you must have at least 2 bad habits"

good write

 

[Pantomime7]

This was really good. I like the way your words flow and form somewhat of a metaphore. Whether you meant it literally or as an illusion, very very nice.

Hope to see more of your writings!

 

[froggygirl]

I loved the first two lines, so fierce.
I also liked how it ended. Very nice.

 

[Beagle]

I liked it too =)

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