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Gunship & the blind Beauty

skjalff

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Gunship & the Beauty

needed to study all night, instead wasted all my time on this:|


Singularity drawn blind pilot
of a camouflage colored gunship torn to pieces.
A flight over the nest of eternal summer
to never again be seen through this tainted crystal.
What used to be a sea of green,
calm and magnificent and full of life
would now just be barking of a rotor,
and stuttering of a red-hot machine-gun.
..So when the pilot would hear a child's laugh
back in his hometown fifteen years later
would it again just be a lifeless scream of the rotor blades
piercing his iris's impervious blackness..?

Or will it be the sea of green
that will appear before his mind's eye..
switching fates with the Vulcan cannon,
pushing it back to the place,
where the pilot could once see it
forever tear the light
out of eyes filled with fear,
and muffle its own deafening sound
in the air, clear and moist?

It is up to him to decide,
for beauty cannot be stolen,
cannot be taken against one's will.
One could be rendered blind, deaf and motionless..
that alone would not do anything,
for there is some deeper, intrinsic beauty
blooming in our every heart-beat
embedded in our very cognition.
The beauty of thoughts, the one of feelings themselves.
And as long as one does not knowingly deny this beauty,
as long as he does not push it away in anger for things lost,
as long as there is warmth, as long as there is life,
the beauty will be there as well.






skjalff
 
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This piece is awesome. I love the imagery that flows from your words and the felling I recieve as I read it. It is true that one moment can haunt us for the rest of our lives if we choose to allow it. And although we may feel bad about something we must look into our inner being and realize that we must go on and leave the moment behind like all the others. Mad Props my friend, keep writing..... I'll definitly read it.
 
Thanks a lot, Pantomime! Lately i'm experimenting with writing sort of emotional things that also have some semblance of a story line.. And yeah, its all about not giving up! I'm glad you like :)




skjalff
 
once again,,,, i am late to reply to people but first........

STUDY!!!!! ;)
second, i like postiveness of this piece and enjoyed reading it ! :)
 
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