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[kasperBoy]

inside my tears are secrets.
i catch them,
i try to know what my mind knows.
i don't.
i just don't.
and she, so new,
makes me feel like she's touching my fingertips,
and i touch her.
emotions of my own run wildly.
anger and pain.
i've cried and laughed.
and still.
i dance around my emotions,
and those arund me.
i ignore those with A.D.D.
they ALL have A.D.D.
and the alcoholics and nymphos have lost a spot in my
heart.
and the ice has more than formed on my heart.
and the bitterness is biting me.
reminding me it is there.
and so maybe, she'll touch my fingertips.
and she'll feel what i want to say,
and ifn't it should be that way,
for nothing else,
someone, at least, almost held my hand.
[ 18 October 2002: Message edited by: kasperBoy ]

 

[rm-rf]

wow i can relate. my whole life i feel like ive been carrying a secret burden, but i dont know what it is. it saddens me greatly though.
werd kaspa!

 

[E-girl]

and so maybe, she'll touch my fingertips.
and she'll feel what i want to say,
and ifn't it should be that way,
for nothing else,
someone, at least, almost held my hand.
you have so much in you, my dear.
someday some girl is going to be so damn lucky
to get to see a part of it up-close.
i love your heart.

 

[goodnitestar]

and the ice has more than formed on my heart
and the bitterness is bitting me
it bites us both!
*wonderful peice kasper!

 

[yoUr bLiSS]

"inside my tears are secrets"
wow...you had me hooked from the first line. for me that is so true because i never let anyone see my tears....amazing work.

 

[Queen Beat]

someone, at least, almost held my hand
For some reason that line touched me so deeply. With that one line you made my throat feel tight, my stomach drop slightly and my heart beat faster. There is so much beauty to be found in pain and loneliness and you expressed it perfectly in this poem. Wonderful, wonderful, wdonerful. Thank you.

 

[Web]

That was amazing kasper.

 

[Angelight]

makes me feel like she's touching my fingertips,
and i touch her.
emotions of my own run wildly.
anger and pain.
i've cried and laughed.
and still.
i dance around my emotions,
woah, this was fantastic.

 

[E-girl]