giving thanks

[Chaotic Action Man]

oh sunshine!
ever appreciated,
especially after so much rain,
I thought the puddles
were to become oceans,
until your fixed gaze
caused them to evaporate away

 

[RareForm]

that's cool you are giving thanks to sunshine, this is very creative, I liked it...it was hella good..

Thanks for sharing CAM!

 

[froggygirl]

Interesting! I like it!

 

[neverwas]

...something which you made me write as a response to ur writting

"they say our water levels are low.
but if you look outside in our back yard
you could get a lil boat and start to row.
theres enough mud and water around
somewhere i do remember
we use to own a yard full of grass.
oh sunshine oh sunshine now that you are here
please stay a while,
or do i have to bribe you with pizza and beer"



i always like looking outside and seeing the sun out during winter. and your peice really made me want to go stand in the sun for a bit