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ARBEX

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May 24, 2000
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Kitchener, Ontario, Canada
Hey, I was going to give this poem to my girlfriend but i don't know if it's worthy...give me your opinion on it please !
For you my love,
i give to you,
a thousand roses and
an i love you...
You were always there
when no one else cared,
holding my hand
and drying my tears...
That's it, I personally thought it kinda sucked but I'm an extremely modest person so I need all you bluelighters to help me out here...
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It isn't the gift itself, but the gesture and the resulting good feelings that is the true gift. Give it to her if it is in your heart to.
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[This message has been edited by Noodle (edited 17 August 2000).]
 
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