Girl without a soul

[*SWeeT-e*]

I'm dying to live
I'm hating to love
I'm crying to laugh
I'm lying for truth
I'm hiding to be found
I'm guarded to expose my soul.
I'm in love with you
So I hate you
I want to kiss you
So I scream at you
I want to be with you
So I lock you out of my soul.
I run, I hide
I'm petrified
Self-destructing suicide
I put my faith in my illusions
I make love to my delusions
And I auction off my soul.
I'll be complete
When I've torn apart
Every piece of my aching heart
I die to live
I despair to be saved
I'm a girl without a soul.
*SWeeT-e*

 

[harraser]

wow. that felt really intense to me, as soon as it hit that third stanza the speed picked right up, it made the poem have a racey feel to me and I like it a lot!!! fucking excellent work!!!!

 

[cherub]

woah,,,, i like that one alot girl

 

[phoenixowen]

That was really cool. You have an awesome talent to manipulate language, I really do think you work shows the complexity of life and reminded me of the god janus; for those who don't know janus is the roman god depicting the split in all things, light/dark good/bad etc.
Well done.

 

[E-girl]

the irony of life, depicted by *SWeeT-e*'s powerful words

 

[Nietzche]

Highly oxymoronic! Your poem has an excellent pace and progression with a very intriguing rhyme scheme. In certain circumstances, of which I certianly think your poem is one, contradictions and dichotomous phrasing can communicate a concept more effectivly than paralell/synonomous adjectives.
One of the better love-orientated poems I have seen on here lately.

 

[Crow]

I've missed your words around these parts. good to see you again.
(((kimmy)))
Great poem.
<---wipes a tear

 

[Web]

Groovy.

 

[buzzy]

that was awesome {{kimmy}} *waves*