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girl of petal, girl of death

vurtomatic

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girl of petal
girl of death
stars abloom
night in your hair
let me breathe
  your scent
  tickling
  libido
in deep
flower girl
dead girl
rosebud crowning
your breasts
petals between
your legs
let me kiss
taste tease
your skin
let me find
or
will you show
this pilgrim
how not to
be?
let me drink
from your petal
this virginal drop
one lost
one found
two bloods
mingled
in this drop
  a pilgrimage foresworn
  a pilgrim swears
  a new
we are enshrined
in this temple
your body
  hands clasped
  head bowed
i enter
  lips unfurling
  door opening
in homage
girl of petal
girl of death
will you love
this pilgrim
found?
welcome him
into your
earthly home
bind him with
  love in hate
  vines of thorns
  hope in despair
two bloods mingled
one returned
girl of petal
girl of death
riddle me
no more
whisper me
your one
true name
girl of petal
lead me to your
secret garden
girl of death
let me sleep
let me rest.
i dont usually comment but this is something different from my usual.
this was initially inspired by the persephone character in a book i recently re-read, jeff noon's pollen (i had wanted to write something "darkly erotic"). as i tried to put it together in my mind (public transport is good for things like this ;) ), it slowly took on a life of its own (as seeds tend to) and lest it grows beyond me, i managed to pen it down today. there are influences by donne, shakespeare, gaimen and noon (ofcourse).
i am at a loss for a title.
:)
[ 21 November 2002: Message edited by: vurtomatic ]
 
wow vurt. im very impressed! this is probably my favorite of your works that ive read so far. i had to read it a few times (ive been at work for over three hours now and am feeling well and truly brain dead) and liked it more each time. the torment of infatuation :-p gotta love it.
ps you have to lend me that book!! ive looked for it in all the libraries i know and havent been able to find it anywhere.
 
dude how did u post this from work? this is too weird :D
this is a "remix" which i prefer more, methinks (wordy is the person who "remixed" it ;) ) :) :
vurtomatic - petals of a girl (wordy remix)
I
girl of petal
girl of death
stars abloom
night in your hair
let me breathe
your scent
tickling
libido
in deep
flower girl
dead girl
rosebud crowning
your breasts
petals between
your legs
let me find
or
will you show
this pilgrim
how not to
be?
II
one lost
one found
two bloods
mingled
in this drop
a pilgrimage foresworn
a pilgrim swears
anew:
we are enshrined
in this temple
your body
hands clasped
head bowed
i enter
girl of petal
girl of death
will you love
this pilgrim
found?
welcome him
into your
earthly home
bind him with
love in hate
vines of thorns
hope in despair
two bloods mingled
one returned.
III
girl of petal
girl of death
riddle me
no more
whisper me
your one
true name
girl of petal
lead me to your
garden secret
girl of death
let me sleep
let me rest.
[ 20 November 2002: Message edited by: vurtomatic ]
 
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