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Bluelighter
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Location
California
Genuine.
I've searched through the depths and stench
Of this city.
For two years.
These were my teachers:
Age: 8
Sex: Male
Ambition: Police Officer
Motivation: "So I can save Mom when she gets in trouble again."
Age: 7
Sex: Female
Ambition: None
Environment: 5 male adults one of who resided in a mental ward for two years. 1 female adult(?) called Mom. 3 bedroom house. One 8 year old male child. Herself.
Mental state: What do you think?
Age: 14
Sex: Female
Ambition: Cocktail waitress
Motivation: Boys.
Problem: Male Abandonment Issues.
Damage Assesment: None
There is no measurement tool for invisible scars in this town.
I've aged a decade through them comforting me weeping their pain.
Even love was no longer a healing ointment over their shattered souls.
I tried.
I've searched through the depths and stench
Of this city
For two years.
The escape door drew closer shut every day.
Cultures within cultures within cultures
Of superficiality.
"Scratch my back
And I'll sell you a
Really amazing Scratch-stick for you and yours ."
Dammit.
I've worked so hard to break through those walls.
And there's nothing there?????!!!!!!!
Yesterday, I went to pick up some packing-boxes.
I saw a black couple
Walking in the park closeby
And had an urge to get out of the car and scream:
"I LOVE YOU. Thank you."
Now I won't be alone at the coloured section
of Dennys anymore.
I volunteered for American Cancer Society
Sales calls were the height of my excietment.
I called back every collection agency that left a message here reciting:
"Welcome to Mind-Fuck".
The male man is fucking ugly though...
Just my luck.
I finally started packing.
Today :
A boy sitting on my couch
Adds a little extra something
In a little something
For a special someone
Who will never know that the extra was added.
Apparently this special someone had had a LONG day yesterday helping yet another someone.
He simply couldn't say No.
At somepoint he'll realize he hasn't run out yet
He won't be able to figure out why.
But he'll smile and be happy none-the less.
Today, I watched good Karma
Created, processed, put through the systems
And on it's way.
Creator and Reciever have swaped roles before.
That's the ONLY way it ever worked anyway.
Hopefully it is one of the few things I will keep from here.
After two years of searching
Through the depth
And Stench
of this city,
I have found solace in aliens finding
No solace here.
They too will leave eventually escaping death.
What goes around DOES comes around.
Generosity
saves
souls.
[This message has been edited by writnpage (edited 05 August 2000).]
 
Wow, that was really awesome. It was so true to a world that I only know through working with the "mentally ill." Sometimes we are taught so much by the people we think need teaching. Quite ironic! I especially love the first part, with the statistics, and the boy who wants to be able to save his mom. That is a wonderful snapshot of not only pure innocence, but also what innocence can do. I think it is important to never let our child become the "inner" child. It should always be lurking just beneath the surface. Anyway, I'm still dazed from my adventures from the previous evening. I want to write more, but I don't think my mind will allow me. Thanks alot though! Writinpage, my opinion of you is very high in these moments of introduction, not that it means anything or should. Thanks again!
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If, when you die you have the opportunity to choose between regular heaven and pie heaven, choose pie heaven. It may be a trick, but if it isn't, mmmmmm boy!!- Jack Handy
 
Zone!!!!! You have absolutely NO idea how much your response made my fuckin day!!!!!
I've had a really really really really really loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong week. Everything short of an accident that could go wrong on California Highways, happened. Nothing of what I wanted to get accomplished was successfully completed
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And I was really really really hoping, someone would notice this poem of mine, that I've been writing in my heart/mind forever.
You noticed. You responded. And you took the time to make me feel good.
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.
Loads of luvs,
-Amina
PS- I'm rolling right now and feeling VERY VERY loved up!!! mwwwwwwwwah
PPS- Wonder if I'll delete this response before anyone else responds to me, cuz I have NO clue what it will read like when I'm sober !
PPS- Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
PPPS- It's all gooooooood
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"Like a bird on a wire, Like a drunk in a midnight choir, I have tried in my way to be free" - Leonard Cohen
 
Writnpage *Mwah*
this was very touching, and heartfelt.
This touches on what really happens in our world and how people need to pay attention more in this world how they treat childern and how they treat other adults,,
love you girl ! you Rawk! ,
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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen
 
i haven't really had much sleep lately....perhaps some day soon i will be able to choose words half as beautiful as yours to let you know how much this post meant to me....
*hugs and love*
you are one of a kind!
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hmmmm. been so long since i've been to the words page. i miss writing. words don't flow much to me anymore, shit.
your post made my day! that was great
 
an interesting change from some of your other writings. I enjoyed trying to piece together your feelings once, then twice, thrice even. I enjoyed it, period.
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this seemed to synch perfectly with how I feel right now,it made me feel sorta sad, and then I read your reply to Zone that you wrote while rolling and I had to laugh.youre a briliant writer,thanks for sharing.
[ 17 December 2001: Message edited by: harraser ]
 
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