Fuck you!

[plazma]

Fuck you!
Pointing at his chest
Your stupid pretensions mean nothing to me
Fuck you!
For all your foolish ideals
For the false ethics you espouse
For all the hypocrisy you are
For the way you act oh so superior
For your moral high ground
Fuck you!
Hate
What you are
What you represent
What you have become
What you were
Everything about you
Insecurity
Fuck you!
Pointing at a mirror
Staring at myself?
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This is my first attempt at writing real poetry...

-plaz out-
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[Haza]

wow...first attempt? nice keep it up that was perty damn powerful

 

[plazma]

^^^^^^^^^^^
Thanks man

-plaz out-
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[Traumatizd4life]

w00t to the plaz-man. niiiiiiiice

 

[plazma]

^^^^^^

-plaz out-
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[Mellabopper]

wow. i definitely like this one.

Mella

 

[plazma]

 

[PsychoKitten]

another great one Plaz
*mad huggles*
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The only thing I'm good at is being bad.

 

[evilcalvin]

Great poem dude!Very powerful and thought provoking.But I can't quite figure out what the message is.(Is there one?)

 

[Noodle]

Well, the fact that this piece is engaging and direct is a plus, in my book. I'd give you a star as well, just for being " plazma. "

 

[C Divinity]

excellent job plaz

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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard...

 

[plazma]

Kitty: thank you sista!

evilcalvin: just the message is to alway question where you are and what you're doing...

thanks for asking a question tho!!!

Noodle: u be rockin!

C Divinity: as always... thank you sweetie very much!!!!

-plaz out-
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[SexayRaverHere]

very good, Keep on writing

 

[E-girl]

very deep and emotional.
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[Jabberwocky]

plazamataz nice work. I like the idea of questioning onesself so that we never get to complacent and are always on our toes. keep up the writting. ill wait patiently for your next one.
-phil

 

[cherub]

Plazma, i know it takes me awhile to respond I read this when it frist came out and i really could not think of how felt about it, so i did not respond, I have read it several times, and realized why it touched me and made me want to ignore it, I have sat and said those things to me before.
Good work for letting it out and go. It is only progress!

 

[yakksoho]

wow good job!!

 

[plazma]

Thank you guys. I really do try and keep questioning myself, because that's the only way to keep myself on the right track. Doing what I think is right. I'm glad that you've got something out of this!

-plaz out-
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