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I put together some of the old poems I wrote from the Words archive (mods, I hope you don't mind). I don't even have "real" copies of them, so searching them out got me pretty nostalgic, remembering the context I wrote them in. :D

Maybe some of the others who've been round for awhile can dig up their posts from the past decade to see some common themes or the evolution of their selves. :) Others are welcome to post their old poems in this thread..

_____

October 22 2008

Sirena

Do you know what a sirena is?
(Shouts the sailor on a motorbike, the wind skims their ears like a giant gust inside a giant seashell)
She sings the sailors in.
They get dizzy
with dreams.

On the motorbike the girl sings.
The wind eats her voice up.

***

Do you know how to read without looking?
Palm in palm.
Lids over eyes.
Walk.
Stop.
Breathe.

***

The goodbye is simple:
The sailor grows the flowers around the temple too.
(The lily pads remind him of rafts)

After he explains the consequence of flowers,
The girl, she sings.

With no wind now, the song climbs up the banyan tree
And drapes itself upon the branches.
It comes down to their feet.
(The words are understood like you understand colors.)

In a siamese wanting to forget and remember,
Together they sing for a gust
To take her away.


_____

October 25 2005

Surrender

The iron rods from the ladder cleft my feet and
White paint flecks my reddened palms.

...

The hustle and hum of the world below
Become a drone when I see

A tiny brown sparrow land
On a single blade of grass.

And they swing
Like a jack-in-the-box
In the wind.

_____

July 24 2005

The Time of the Decade for Fresh Paint.

As I scrape
The dried plum paint
(Red from outside)
From the emblem
of the vintage car

The ridges
Slowly show
Trans
Lucent
With powdered scab
At their feet

The rhythm of habit,
Like praying the
Rosary
You close your eyes and never
Open to be
Jolted

By too many beads left, or
Ridges like the
Pages of a
Bible

Purple, beside
Clear and unearthed
Makes me panic.

_____

March 10 2002

Rain

your voice.
it taps
on flesh
and tingles
nerves,
much like
how a
single
drop's
enough
to draw
out
clouds
of hot
breath
beating
howls
of
widowed
wind.
steam
smoke
water
dancing
in the
rhythm
of the
fading
light.
fading
light
fading
somewhere
i must
have
missed
to ask
your
name.
words
like yours
remind me
much
of
mama’s
hot
breath
beating
howls
of
widowed
wind.
fading
light
fading,
dancing to
the howls
of
widowed
wind
fading,
light
dancing.


_____

March 3 2002

Love

love goes bad too easily.
it is not that sweet wine that you claim it to be, but curdled milk left unsuckled by a dead infant.
perhaps i should learn how it is to die faster.
perhaps i should learn how to be the one to walk from my ghosts.
but ghosts fade too fast, they always leave me watching them go.
love is not wine, not even poison intoxicating enough for me to drink.
love is spoilt milk, peircing acid scarring the walls of my nose.
but i drank it anyway.
perhaps i should learn how not to be so stupid.
 
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I like the passion of these mystical pieces. Thanks for re-posting them :)
 
Banyan Trees, a jack in the box, howling in the rain, bittersweet love and one very thought provoking piece make these worthy of reposting indeed:)

It can be an interesting thing to go back and read old thoughts.
 
Thanks for reposting these. :)

I remember reading 'Surrender' when you first posted it (or maybe I found it and bumped it?), but the others were new to me. I really like 'Sirena'. You have a way with imagery and sensory detail.

Maybe I'll go through my old posts and create some kind of 'highlights package'? lol, it's a pretty cool idea actually.
 
Agreed, wouldn't be a bad idea for people to showcase what they felt was their best or favourite work/s and have it all in once place.
 
I like the idea.

And the paint one, how the idea of an unfinished project makes you panic.:)
 
Thought i'd get involved and throw in a few my favourites of my own

shades of grey
as it may
let it be
shades of gray is all i am

shades of gray

an unfinished dark room
spewing forth undeveloped images
of a colourless life

shades of gray

images brought to life
trickery as an art form
at its best

shades of gray

eyes like prisms
in a myriad of kaleidoscpic worlds
forming images most unreal

shades of grey

shadowing the true colours of my life
beneath the shattered glass
stained to imperfection

shades of grey

hiding the depth of the puddles in the earth
filling deeper and deeper
until it rains

shades of grey

torrents of rain wash away the grey
like lenses positioned to focus
on the world

shades of grey

poised and ready
to make new the next life
all in the same day

shades of grey

through the turnstyle i pass
and step aside
on ahead i say

shades of grey

i push you ahead
you not me
i know im not yet ready

shades of grey

the turnstyle locks and im stuck again
and the clouds move in again
only no more rain

shades of grey

here i stand
waiting and watching
waiting for a sign

shades of grey

harder than clay
its set in this time
where to go

shades of grey

do i wait for the rain again
or a storm
what then

shades of grey

more than rain it takes
to clear the mud from my skin
to open my eyes

shades of grey

no room for sunlight to seep through

unless it seeks me out
down the two way street
where were destined to meet

until then

shades of grey!










crimson streets
shadow men dancing like puppets in the night
masquerading as henchmen
lost on their way to the dick tracy convention
bouncing dancing darting and floating benath the street lights
often times in appearnce a mythical bedtme charcter on a broomstick
framed by the pale moon
and always the big willow tree creaking and swaying in the night
what lurks beneath is only one keyturn away
from stability and the straight now
but the old lock is rusted into the oak
the door so long unused almost petrified
like a roadside show and tell
an unnamed pitstop for passers by
who wont stop for no one these days
and the wind blows the clouds in and they settle in for the night
covering the moon from sight
and then they come out to play
no more creaking doors
theyre all shut tight now
until............................................. ...........................................









external animalistic tendencies
through yellow eyes
slit like a wrist
vision impaired
blurry vision
intangible beginnings

nowhere to start
no end in sight
coughing blood
in emrgency 101
trolleys of bodies
corpses gone by

elbows resting
ears pinned on the curtains
who comes
who goes
frantic movement
confined by repressed desire
in my minds eye
I see lotus petals

petals writhing through murky scenes
of indesirable dreams
bound from sub-conscious desires
unknown & unwanted
to be forever left behind

to lay to rest
an unpeace
peace just out of reach







the essence of solitude
meaningless dispositions in an unparralelled mindscape
flitter flutter through the crux of it all

mismatched thoughts riding the wave of a tsunami
created by a misguided warhead

out of control sensationalisms
all filtered through the alien brainchild

that held the pen to the blueprints of my mind
all within reach of the telekinetic mind

beware the untold prophet
his legacy is false

all thats real are the things beyond
everything on the outer

within deep within
poissance instilled

tunneling deeper
the darker it gets

but the quieter it grows
the intervals grow farther apart

travelling at light speed there is no end
when it does realization hits

like a train at the end of the line
it comes so suddenly

like in an explosion in abyss
floating in deep space

solitude is found







daytime thoughts
6am and sleepy eyed
what of the night before
roll over and out of bed
time to dress and caffeinate myself

foggy thoughts lifting
on with dreary feelings
to smiles on faces
and rays of sunshine
beaming through windows
to faces on the other side

where everyones getting on
and moving on
as the day rolls by
i know where i am
and close my eyes
and smile for everyone around me

i sit and listen
and watch the day
and think how people out there
just like me do what i do.

none in the same
all living each day as their own
living and learning
waking up to the world around them
knowing and understanding
nothing is the same

i sit and think
were all on a wavelength of our own
with similarities each to our own
trying to keep up the pace
watching faces as they pass
now dreary-eyed and tired

home to bed
ready for a new day
to do and see it all again
in a new light

good night.
 
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i've only posted one original piece in here. but i can assure you all, i toiled hard on this, and not a single word or bit of punctuation isn't exactly where it should be. i want to do more, but ironically the subject matter is probably what stops me.

"Purgatory"

THEY took away my life force, unexpectedly
a false sense of security, snatched away

so many facets of your personality
happiness; randomness; usefulness; CONNECTED-ness
all gone in a random act of stupid-ness

i thought i had too much of you, foolishly
now you're gone i miss you, terribly

THEY fill me with false promises while i rage
friday; monday; wednesday; friday
shameless lies to keep my anger at bay

i fill the nights with prehistoric pastimes, mindnumbingly
ignoring your mocking eye; disgustedly

an unwelcome journey to the time before you
tedium; repetition; futility; solitude
every waking minute a reminder of you

tomorrow you will return, hopefully
where we will become one again, interfrastically
 
We are the walking dead
Decaying with every rail
Blind to the pain
Habit is all we know

Feeding in, Bleedind sin
Our eys burned of the taste
Secreting only lies
We are the walking dead

Reaper our best friend
with a black market appeal
Wrong train on an endless track
We are the walking dead

Wheels frozen screeching along
Another junkies wasted waste
Slaves to our darkest desires
Careful not to burry me before I'm dead.


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Remember the horror
Diluted lies
Misguided warrior
w/ pale beady eyes

Tracking through muck
Sickness inside
Painfully stuck
Heaven beside

Spiking the pain
Sets our tools
Tapping out veins
Just lonely fools

Remember this
When we are well
Urges resist
Avoiding hell



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Sun has set on the pain
Ebb and flow now evident
Coming in out of the rain
Rhythm's time now relevant

Black widows web we weave
Caulist soul holding tight
Life's misfourtune on your sleeve
Shedding skin to blinding light

How do we see our own eyes
Perspectives backwards riddle
Oceans full of looming lies
Dissipating stuck in the middle

Motives skeewed where we sit
Table set seated at the head
Times adventure do we fit
Mindless sheep eat what we're fed

Locked in a puzzle or a dream
Way outside rightous thought
Wounds bleeding so it seems
Ungrateful losing what we sought

Close your eyes be free
Know your mind don't follow
Change of pace a sober me
In strife no longer wallow

B.J.A.
 
Can I abuse the purpose of this thread?

I can't think of anything of mine that's worth a re-post, but I still remember the first time I read the following two pieces in Words. They're both long, but bear with them.

MiNiMoWs - if you have a few minutes to spare... (long)

the setting:
Sitting on the floor in my closet trying to scrape up approximately a half gram of coke into a fold (made from a Revlon Colorsticks ad) for safe keeping until the next time we decide to do it. The following moments will motivate me to wash $40 down the drain and two days later, throw away our bullet containing another quarter gram of coke into an outdoor trash can on my daily lunchtime run. Yes, I went jogging with a bullet of coke in my fist.
Now, on with the story...
In My Closet on 01.21.02
"Fuck this SHIT."
(laughing in realization like when I discovered the truth behind the Catholic religion)
Okay.
So we did it AGAIN this weekend
It’s only been a handful of times
Since 2002 began
Three weeks ago
We hosted the party of the year (so what if it’s only January 21st)
Gave half of Denver
A night to remember
And gave our friend and roommate a goodbye
Wrapped up in the walls of this place
And in the arms and smiling faces
Of best friends and strangers
This place
Where we shared so many fun times
That didn’t leave white flaky messes.
I stop and think about who I am
When I’m on it
When I’m off it
When I’m chopping lines in our kitchen at 8am
To feed our habits
I must look like a rock star
Or a total fool
Or the girl who everyone wants to be sitting next to
And then I think about the girl
Who likes chopping veggies in the morning
For your egg white omelets
To feed our bellies
And look like a nurturer – who I want to be
And have you sit next to me
So that I can feed you the world.
It’s true every new occasion overshadows
The previous bender
But this time
THIS time
THIS TIME...
We’ll let this one be the most spectacular one of all
The one where we attempted to go out in public
Only to be shut out by bowlers with Downs Syndrome
(truth be told, they looked better than we did)
The one where we had to call in Arm & Hammer, Reynolds, and Charmin
And actually had to phone a friend for the correct measurements
To give us one final wave of euphoria
The one where yet another time we could
Exhale in relief and thank heavens
No cops
No fights
No overdoses
No pukers
Although that one corner in the living room did smell like urine.
Let this one be the one that we remember
As the one that was so many things
That we won’t even try to top it.
The one where we wound up again
In our love nest
And tried to order porn
And successfully indulged in it
After a solid 30 minutes
Of technical difficulty
And the sex we swam in shortly thereafter
Was perfectly timed
Even two sober people
Couldn’t have come harder
Couldn’t have felt so alive
But we’ll try our best
And in the minutes following
This monumental frolic
Well, the word precious
Was designed for just that space of time.
And from where I am right now
On this very floor
I can still see you in the doorway
Of my closet
Admiring my body and telling me I’m beautiful
As I change into my Elements shirt
And lowrider Hurley’s
That you bought for me
Your "favorite scrubby outfit of mine"
You ask yourself
How’d you ever get a girl like me?
And the way you looked
When you spoke those things
I sometimes wonder if it’s possible
For you to top the things you say
And more than that…
How was it ever possible
For me to get
A boy like you?
And then a few hours later
You say this other thing
This thing which defines that word
Precious.
It’ll cause me to do unthinkable things
This thing
It’ll even change other things
Which thankfully won’t even happen, now.
It’ll make us the most dazzling people
We know
We will be the cool ones
Who we are
Who enjoy each other
And everyone else
Substance free
This thing you said
It speaks to me
And these words
They dance inside of me
And here’s what you said
(my head plays it over and over and over)
"I’d much rather hang out with my girlfriend –
Sober".

And while I find it hard to believe everyone hasn't read this...

Punky .......... (a very stoned Ashke tells a story)

I remember when I was first swallowed whole by the rave scene. It happened so quickly. One night I was mingling on the tassels of a crowd that intrigued me, and the very next I found myself woven into the very tapestry of it all. My first experience wasn't with the weekend ravers, the middle-class kids who have jobs and classes, a life that has parties on the side. These were the ones who were ravers as a lifestyle.

Most of them minors and parentless, had nothing but the party scene for comfort and acceptance, a family. Their rents were earned through drugs and 'spanging' ("Got any spare change?"). Those street drifters that couldn't keep down homes would migrate between those who could, in exchange for friendships, drug connections, loyalty, physical protection... There is still much you can offer even when you're broke and carry home around in a backpack.

So day two in my dabbling with a group that had vaguely intrigued me, I found myself in the heart of it, among these kids who lived for nothing else. And they were some characters. Beautiful souls on some of these children, and there were times it just poured out of their eyes as they spoke to you. I found myself sitting in this squatter house in the heart of the slums that surround campus, and it was packed with all these people who lived like lost boys.

The furniture fell into two categories; something to sprawl on, or something that looked cool while you were tripping. When I first met Punky, I was perched nervously on one of the former watching her be hypnotized by the latter.

She was beautiful. She was lost in one of those lightning balls, the purple globes that send white fire racing at your fingertips. Her face was pure little girl wonder streaked with ultra-violet shadows. I asked very timidly, "Are you tripping...?" for I never had tripped, but just watching her made me think I might better understand what LSD was like. She took a very long time to nod, and longer still to drag her focus away and look at me.

I murmured, "What do you see...?"

And she just smiled at me with distraction and said, "It isn't visual." That baffled me, because I didn't know there WAS anything to it but visuals. However her attention returned to the globe before I could question it.

She answered me anyway, without speaking another word for the rest of the night. I think the globe was captivating because of the thoughts I saw racing behind the focus her eyes. I wonder if she was lost in the magic concept of white fire rushing to greet her touch, or maybe the thought of being caught inside that glass prison, braving an insane violet storm?

The glimpse I got of her that night was a precious and rare one, and it wouldn't be til later that week that I met the Punky most of the world saw. Yet that side intrigued me too. She was so *strong*! She fiercely protected those close to her, watched with guards up on those in the distance, and refused to take shit from *anyone*.

Punky was every bit as short as me, but it never stopped her from being intimidating to anyone who knew her. She was lovely, but she saw this as an obstacle to overcome in expressing her real self. She did what she could to downplay or harden her looks: her jungle kid gear... her shaved head with bangs kept in long spikes that fell in angles to sharpen the soft curves of her pretty cheeks and round face.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Note to the reader: At this point one might notice slight changes in Ashke's tone, or wordchoice, or whatever... It's because at this point her sweetheart of a boy very suddenly started to trip balls and required the whole of her attention. The story was picked up again the following day at work after absolutely no sleep, entirely too much caffeine, and the mental exhaustion of keeping up with Loupy's acid-wired discussions and leap-frog thought process all night long. Thank u drive thru.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Ever felt that you've fallen in love with someone you could never really touch? Punky was like that. Untouchable. She considered me a friend, and I knew she'd always have my back, but I knew I would never be allowed to really know her. I would never learn her secrets, get past her guards. I'd never see her cry.

But I suppose it doesn't matter. I think back to that summer and even now, a full year later, my memories of that girl are still so bright in my mind! She was every bit the stronger woman I had always wanted to be.

I remember the lewd, playful sparkle as she praised a passing college student's, er, feminine assets. She spoke with a crude, bold candor that managed to surprise and impress the all the nearby straight boys chagrined to agree with her.

I remember the night I went to campus and was eagerly told the tale of this magnificent showdown between Punky and a seventeen year old runaway turned dealer by the name of Shawn. He got himself in a financial "situation", and in his desperation tried selling bunk pills to the campus regulars. When a bunch of kids got sick off his shit, Punky hunted him down, thoroughly kicked his scrawny white ass, and made sure he understood that those were HER kids and she wasn't going to put up with shit like that. They say he's still in Ohio somewhere but no one I've talked to has seen him since.

I remember the compassion in the way she held my face this late summer night when I ODed on K. I remember how Punky's face swam in and out of recognition, but in those rare moments of focus it looked so stricken with the knowledge that she'd been the one who'd sold it to me. Her calm soothing words would reach me like some white noise I couldn't logically interpret as words... I could only grasp that I wasn't alone, and that someone had decided I wasn't allowed to drift away tonight. And dying, well, that was just out of the question.

I remember one night at a rave, how surprised I was to see Punky there... and taken further aback when she stumbled up to me with effort. She was rolling SO hard... off ridiculously too many pills, I'm sure. And I might have been concerned but she got up real close to my face and just studied me for a moment. It was clearly hard to focus on my face, but she forced it, and then mumbled something intensely heartfelt. Heartfelt.... and unintelligible. And then someone had snagged her arm from behind and she was dragged off. I've shyly wondered many times what she might have said that night, or if she remembers at all. Honestly, I doubt it. More than anything, I wonder if the truth would be disappointing compared to all the possibilities my over-active imagination conjured up just because of the way she locked that intense, unsteady gaze on my face.

When winter comes, the campus is like a ghost town at night. Between late August and early January I never saw her.

~*~*~*~

There are downsides to making friends with the campus rats. I mean, I don't regret the time I spend among them. As I said, I met some beautiful souls and lived out so many accidental adventures, found myself in the craziest situations and had some wildly fun moments there. The boring, milk-fed suburbia that I sprung from, well it never made me feel anything but restless, bored, sedated. But the price I pay is the understanding that I every day I watch some of these kids I love fiercely embrace their own self-destruction.

I guess I thought Punky would survive it somehow, you know? I admired her strength and her sense of honor and loyalty so much...

As the days got warmer, I found myself visiting campus more frequently. It was so exciting to see old familiar faces crawl out of the woodwork, and soon almost the whole crowd from last summer was accounted for.

She's not the same. I don't know what happened this winter, but she's lost something. I can't put my finger on it exactly, but each time I see her I feel its absense with an increasing sense of loss and gravity.

She's thinner, but it's so much more than that. I don't see the others walk eggshells around her like they used to. I don't see the hearty laugh or the spark of mischief. They say she doesn't sell as much as she used to, and a little investigation revealed that no one trusts her enough to front her anything these days. I heard she didn't party anymore. Though she was always friendly with me, she only seemed concerned these days with getting fucked up, scoring drugs for others, or trying to regain control on whatever insane chemical combo was overwhelming her at the moment. It was all about drugs now.

I remember how it stung me to overhear that the pills she had to offer this week were green clovers and cross-tops. I looked her dead in the eye and murmured numbly, "Clovers are DXM, aren't they? I've researched them..." And god, the way her eyes flared up with shame and defense as she mumbled, "I dunno, maybe, I heard they were smacky or something..." Oh god. I wanted to take her shoulders and shake her. You fucking bitch, you know exactly what fucking robotrip is, you know how much damage that shit does. Can you be the same wrathful angel that chased off that slimy fucker Shawn? Can you be the same girl I wanted so badly to be only a year ago?

It really ate at me why she had changed so much. What did it? I almost wanted to put blame with the kids who still saw her throughout the winter, but the answer I got was the same. "I try to tell her she oughta be good to herself, but you know Punky, she ain't gonna fuckin' listen."

Nobody really wanted to talk about it. I speak of my own sense of loss, but I know they felt her slip away too and that it must have pained them somehow.

These days I realized that the more I learned, the more I realized that deep down I was furious at her. How dare she let me down when I had looked up to her so utterly. I was so angry that I still missed her so much. Most of all I hated that I couldn't hate her. It would have been easier, but I remember when by chance last week I came across her all alone, curled up and disturbingly pale. It took me a moment to realize that she was miserably, violently ill. Coming down? I had no clue. I didn't want to care. She fucking did it to herself.

Right...?

Of course, what else? FUCKING BITCH! Do you know how badly I wanted to know you last summer? Do you know how honored I was that you called me your friend and always said you'd 'have my back'? Me, who was so shy and meek. I wanted to mold my own courage and dignity after your shining example. And now you come to me another skinny little corpse with all the smolder in your bold gaze gone ashen and dead. YOU KILLED THIS BEAUTIFUL PERSON I TREASURED AND FOR WHAT?

Fucking drugs. *laugh* You'd think that at some point I'd just get used to it. I swear to god I'm a junkie magnet. These motherfuckers win my heart and then they give it back and forget me in favor of pining after needles and chemical bliss.

Needles, yeah... She's shooting meth. I'm too daunted to even plot a rescue for this girl I'd loved. It's too plain to see that she's consumed by it. She doesn't seem receptive to help, and quite frankly I'm done risking my sanity trying to bring back the spiritually dead. It's too hard. Too unlikely. So fuck her. FUCK HER.
Right?

But as she huddled there so sick and all alone, I couldn't be angry at all. I crouched down beside her, and it all just slipped away. At that moment I could only brush her long bangs back as she emptied her stomach over the half dead grass she knelt on. I opened my mouth, and could only fill the awful silence between wet choking and gasps with my own murmured comfort. I could only remember that night I'd been so sick and alone... distantly, quietly terrified at the certainty that this mental detachment and numbness I couldn't escape was my own death's approach. And knowing that she held me then, that at the time it was noble and real, quiet acknowledgement that in her own gruff way she cared about me.

It's only a few days now that I've known the whole truth, really. But it still hasn't fully sunk in. It's so strange... In a way it's almost comforting to me. I mean, meth...? My brave friend has been ruined by meth addiction? My old demon? I don't know... It's fierce powerful stuff to be sure, but somehow *I* managed to struggle free. It was this battle that I somehow conquered, and continue to conquer to this day when I must. And Punky, she sells DXM to the very ones she used to defend with her life.
It's no less tragic of course, losing a friend, but it does give me some perspective. Maybe I'm not so lacking in strength after all. Maybe I'm doing alright for myself. And though it doesn't make me miss the girl she used to be any less, I think I should maybe look inside before returning to the false idol of strength I worshiped last summer.

~*~ Ashke ~*~
 
^^^ wut??? You can't think of anything of yours that's worth reposting, heresy. I've just made it my mission to do that for you in the next day or two.

Thanks for the posting those last two, I had only read the one by Ashke before but not the other.
 
<3

October 14, 2004
On Meeting with an Ex Lover

Right before dusk
Orange sun shimmer
As feather sheets of time
Rest upon my thumb
Flicker past pages
Of a book I cannot read
....

I glimpse vendors, of paper rolled
Roses redolent
With the warm fragrance of the sea
I buy two for my friend
To whom i once confessed ; I too
Carry the sea within me
....

Offer more I closed my eyes
Dream back days of quickening
Salty nights as blood raced, hear
Only echoes of desires
The longing of my secret storms
In all unguarded moments
You swallow me whole
As my belly furled like wild waves
Casting streaks of white light
Like bruises on an indigo sky
....

Sighing
I weigh my breath
Slight as a pulse
Now wary of everything
Shadows conspire to find me
Remembering
How we once cavorted paper-cut
Dolls dancing in synergy
Clasped
In aberration to fate
I keep silent vigil
Intent on that corner door
Through the haze of cigarette smoke
I see you as before
Freshly arrived
Smelling of flannel and
Sex on the beach
....

"Who are you?" I ask, and
Dizzy with love, you cant answer.


~~~~~~~


November 13, 2004
Memories

Dust. Feather fragments. The shadow of Snow. Melting from the Eyes. Flowing. Flicker through the slits. Cascades. Betwixt Blinds. Like a Hail. Of granite Rock. Or blinding white Ice. Like Rapid. Mouth movements. Beneath Parallel. Lips. Lids. The French-window Wide. And ledgered. Sunlit and Warm. Where one Length. Overlaps. Against the Next. Staggered. Like the Spine. Of a musical Sequence. Graceful. The Slats Arc. Segments. States. Of Drowning. Comprehended as. Rhythm. As Pattern. For the mind to Decipher. The Thing. Seen Complete. Swallowed Whole. Gulped and Sutured Shut. The World Halts. Between the Blink. The Conclusion. Of a Millisecond. Time. Depth. Space. Bridged. By What. This threads in Us. This Life Continues. Going Down .The Staircase. Coming Up. In Dreams.
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I really like that first one you posted, mariacalls.

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Power Addict July 17, 2007


A thought is sparked, a pathway open
Ripping through my nerves and skin
I see my swath of new destruction
And I've yet to really begin
Eyes ablaze with righteous rage
Ripping, roaring on the floor
My ego's fire pulls and burns me
And raised the death toll of my tour
Shockwave, shockwave, burning bright
Clears my vision for a bit
Just enough to horrify
Then back to drilling like a bit
Broken doors on broken houses
Broken like a housepet's will
My broken rage, my broken fury
A whirlwind just waiting to kill
He is we, in touch, insane
Feeding of our fear and shock
Rolling, riveting our attention
Power for those about to Rock.

A rolling rock, a wrecking ball
Waves of debris that were made
No protection from this solar flare
Not inside or in the shade
Consuming all, in holocaust
Conflagration at its core
Sieving out the good intentions
Vapors flaming from its pores
Feeding it's sadistic hunger
A repast rife with reds and woe
Burning in forever's glory
Foretelling ill will near, in tow
Annihilating, Disintegrating
The future is rocked
With our pasts of ill temper
Our futures are mocked


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"My Friends Are My Strength!" September 20, 2007


This one goes out to Optimus Prime.

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Smelted in shadows, formed in need,
A hero's press prints virtue
of determination.
Battling the death of living ends
sans glorious intentions and without
personal gain - a farce!
Tears well up and cry dry,
already spent inside, collecting into
a titanium engine powered
through thoughts
tenacious, and most troubling; The end
of those protected and
of those supporting cast members,
of those front-line furies alongside.
A hero's desire
is selfish desire, seeking
a finish where
he can go home to
what he was fighting for.
 
upallnight... both of those bring back a lot of memories... i practically have minimows' one memorized. all of hers actually. and i had forgotten all about ashke.
 
lostNfound, I really like ‘crimson streets’. Great stuff. :)

felix, I love how you’ve ended on the word ‘interfrastically’! LOL, reminds me of one of my favourite Blackadder episodes...

DaBricks, I love this closing stanza:

Close your eyes be free
Know your mind don't follow
Change of pace a sober me
In strife no longer wallow

up all night, thanks for re-posting those pieces. Like lostNfound, I’d read ashke’s piece before (was glad to read it again). Hadn’t read MiNiMoWs’ though. It flows like it was just written off the cuff, dancing through memories.

mariacallas, I like the form and experimentation of your second piece. I’m really into prose poetry.

Samael, there’s a real intensity in your first poem, and I dig what you’re doing with linebreaks in the second one. I must find my Optimus Prime... must be buried in a cupboard at my parents’.
 
Ok, here's 3 from me. For form's sake I should point out that earlier versions of 'Inscriptions' were published in Unusual Work and POAM, and 'Drive-thru' was published in Mascara.


Inscriptions [2006]

Why don’t you cover me with words?

Write ‘BEGIN’ on my forehead,
as a message to the mirror, to my kindred
and my punishers –
I am ready.

I can imagine ‘A-G-O-N-Y’
across the knuckles of my left hand,
‘E-C-S-T-A’ across the knuckles of my right
(ecstasy is always truncated). The ‘S’
delayed on to my left buttock,
and the ‘Y’ given to my right,
so that at a time of my choosing, you,
while clasping my right hand behind me,
will see me abandoned
and complete.

Write ‘SOUL’ somewhere on my body,
‘BODY’ somewhere on my soul…

‘COMPASS’ along my cock,
making preparations for compassion,
because desire remains
to be navigated
(this body of water).

What will you scrawl across my eyes?
Ciphers? Coordinates? Keys?
Will I ever be able to read them?

What should the inscriptions say
inside my ear –
what sin,
that you could not say there?


Inferno [2006]

& when you finally touch down
____________________-in hell
____________(no red carpet)
_________the coffee’s gonna need to be strong.
Hungover-horny & (shit!) your sunglasses
_______-left at home in a jacket pocket.
Of all the things to be without...
Sterling Morrison, Joey Ramone & Ray Charles
smarter men than you (on this score)
____-look godlike standing round in shades
______(still!)
The future’s so bright, etc.
It's funny, Lucifer’s looking a lot
like Danny Tenaglia these days.
Guess he’s always hoarded the killer tunes.
______________________-Had them all
back at the tree, in snaketime. Brokered ever since.
So here’s the rub:
there’s drugs everywhere
but no painkillers
or sleepers.
_____-Figure pretty quick that you won’t
be sleeping ‘til… who knows…
Judgement?
____-But by then your bender will’ve
gathered such momentum that
you’ll’ve forgotten everything
important – even what they say
about the wicked. Anyway, it’s true. And
_____________-they're out of ice.


Drive-thru [1998]

The radio sniffling some song out, and
its candy glare seduces us, drawing
conversation to the fringes, as cigarette
ash rains from the wound-down windows,
the car idling like a lover's sleeping face.

Queuing up in the drive-thru we feel itchy,
as if we're watching lottery balls land
while chewing our tickets; like a mobile
chirping at the back of the theatre, we're
crying out to be muted, forgotten, satisfied.

We bin the cups & wraps, waste more cigarettes,
then drive... through a streak of green lights
that flick to late amber, past sullen drivers
tapping fingers on steering wheels,
windscreens snatching warped ghosts.

And the zebra crossings stripe under us,
as the radio station goes off the air, and
we are handed over to the silence, as a
speed camera gets another dumb picture,
its diamond flash dribbles off the car.


And as a bonus, here's one that I posted under an old username (WordyOne). For fans of Allen Ginsberg.
 
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I'm really enjoying this thread so far.

Wordy, I love inscriptions ad what you did with referencing peoples names in Inferno and it's layout.

Stickied for the time being.
 
Samael ---
A rolling rock, a wrecking ball
Waves of debris that were made
No protection from this solar flare
Not inside or in the shade
Consuming all, in holocaust
Conflagration at its core
Sieving out the good intentions
Vapors flaming from its pores
Feeding it's sadistic hunger
A repast rife with reds and woe
Burning in forever's glory
Foretelling ill will near, in tow

and .....
Wordy ---
The radio sniffling some song out, and
its candy glare seduces us, drawing
conversation to the fringes, as cigarette
ash rains from the wound-down windows,
the car idling like a lover's sleeping face.

I really like these pieces , good imagery, words I like to say out loud, thumbs up.
 
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