DigitalTweak
Bluelighter
- Joined
- Jun 3, 2001
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Ok idont know if this is against forum rules or anything or if this doesnt fit so if it is i am sorry and please close this thread. Everyone who freestyles or even if you dont you should try and write one and postthem here. This is my first attempt at a freestyle so here goes:
MC FLATLINE, and my girlfriend is so fine, like a summer day at the park where everyone has a blunt to spark and there is no thought of murder cuz where i am from that is unheard of. But we still creep, neck deep in the drama that leads to trauma in the heart of 207. Where drug overdoses send us to heaven like heroin my girl is dope, she gave me hope and a new way to cope. While the fiends forget their dreams and run their schemes to chase the dragon but their minds work like a one wheeled wagon. That was where i was heading down a dead end street, speeding like acop on the beat, fast, but that was in the past, i fell but i'm back on my feet 8 inches of pure meet, prime rib, light a jib and get high as the stakes when slangin, i never leave my boys hangin but damn you got to understand my baby's body is bangin like a shot of cocain in the vein from my balls straight to my brain, she makes me forget my pain.
Id like to hear feedback if it was anygood and other peoples rymes.
peace
MC FLATLINE, and my girlfriend is so fine, like a summer day at the park where everyone has a blunt to spark and there is no thought of murder cuz where i am from that is unheard of. But we still creep, neck deep in the drama that leads to trauma in the heart of 207. Where drug overdoses send us to heaven like heroin my girl is dope, she gave me hope and a new way to cope. While the fiends forget their dreams and run their schemes to chase the dragon but their minds work like a one wheeled wagon. That was where i was heading down a dead end street, speeding like acop on the beat, fast, but that was in the past, i fell but i'm back on my feet 8 inches of pure meet, prime rib, light a jib and get high as the stakes when slangin, i never leave my boys hangin but damn you got to understand my baby's body is bangin like a shot of cocain in the vein from my balls straight to my brain, she makes me forget my pain.
Id like to hear feedback if it was anygood and other peoples rymes.
peace
