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FixXxer

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Dont care about a ryhme
Jus needa speak my mind
I needa find
Tha lil man inside

Who tells me the right and the wrong
Tells me when to hit the bong
When to listen to my song
Even when to get along

He tells me my thoughts
He shows me the differant spots
Where to hide the pain i gots
Goin slow, only 15 knots
To a place, to meet this bot

The bot i call me
The one only i can see
Deep in my mind, i believe
I can do anything with skill, and i am free.
Its where i can swim in the sea,
Stop in a huge open feild, and smoke some weed.

Lay in the grass, look at the stars.
See the people, yet to land on Mars.
Over there, very far
with a few friends, no need for any war.
 
i liked this ,,,, i suck at making anything rythm but you did great !
 
:), i dont try to. i just write, and i tend to ryhme. but its hard to ditch it when 3/4 of the way thru u relaize everything ryhmes lol
 
yeah same here.
everything i wrote used to rhyme,
now my style is completely different, and i cant rhyme anything worth a damn.
 
lol.. that sucks.. i hope i dopnt lose my ryhming!!
i like it =D
 
very original...and that's always a plus...good write
 
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