Fraction attraction.

[NeWBoRN]

I exist amidst a whisp of security,
a blanket, enchanted, an escape from reality,
just a little day away from crumbled eyes and daisy chains,
We can lay on the grass and lose our self in daydreams,
subliminal visuals among the trees the birds and squirrels,
Come and cuddle up now the suns going down it's dark out,
we could lie awake for days listening to Jimmy Page,
Hendrix and Bill Hicks, Aphex Twin and Plastikman,
Hold my hand and understand who Iam and why I am,
then we can forget all that and drift away into outer space,
give me strength and empathy, let me be your memories,
let it go at sunset, as jet streams invade the sky,
tell me why I don't know why I don't feel at home anymore.

 

[Raz]

That was really great...I was kind of divided on whether it worked for or against it as one big block of text, but I think it definitely works for it...helps keep the stream going, and cements it as one big block of feeling.

The last line especially I can really relate to, and I think it's a great way to end it:

"tell me why I don't know why I don't feel at home"

nice stuff