For You

[Dekloren]

Hands are shaking
Mouth is dry
Thinking of you in my waking
You are my natural high

Tingling and trembling
Inside and out
My heart is yours for the taking
Without a doubt

Unconditional
Is how I feel
Like we are two souls
Bound by something so real

All the miles that seperate us
Almost disappear by the sound of your voice
Soon I will leave this city in the dust
It is only time now, not a choice

My heart reaches out for you
I long to touch, to feel, to hold
If only you really knew
What you give to me can't even be compared with gold

I wish I could give you the world
And everything else you deserve
I know I'll try my best
I just hope I can pass the test

It's so real, it feels like a dream
Too good to be true
But as the days pass by, it seems
I keep falling more and more in love with you

 

[cherub]

Lovely put,, whomever it is for should feel lucky that you can write so elegent words for them.

Definately had a mushy love flow but it fit well

 

[RareForm]

I liked this one a great deal...it kind of reminded me of a 3 Doors Down song, I don't know if you wanted to hear that, but I really liked it so....

Keep up the great writing!

 

[Dekloren]

It was just that one line
But it fit so well..:D

 

[RareForm]

It do fit well, I really liked it in the poem...I wasn't saying it was a bad thing, trust me i have done the same thing before..