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for Jen... "Walk Away"

E-girl

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for Jen... "Walk Away"

I can't count how many times I had to watch my heart break,
Right there in front of me
Sometimes it took a lot to tear my soul out,
Others it was just the mention of her name,
Just four letters,
And my whole world collapsed.
It could be even 2 years later,
And just seeing that name spelled out, next to his,
On my computer screen,
Still makes me want to scream.
I always thought, i hope no one ever has to meet this girl,
And feel this,
And know what i went through for all that time,
Even for one day.
I like to think it made me a stronger person but the truth is,
I havent seen her in almost two years and still the thought of her
Makes me so goddamn vulnerable.
I used to sit in the house on Carson Street,
Where the four of us lived,
Where me and her used to clean the house and light candles,
And wait patiently for our men to come home.
It seems like a million years ago,
but there were so many memories in that house,
And from time to time, they haunt me.
There was the girl upstairs who used to be my best friend,
Who i had some of the best times with in that house,
With the beer stains on the white carpet.
And then downstairs with a guy I was going to marry...
Who i would have done anything for.
And then one of my best friends,
Who sat around and listened to the Cure
and thought he could drown his sorrows in a bottle of beer.
If only it were that simple.
Sometimes i think about them.
I wonder if that guy i once fell in love with,
ever thinks of me.
I wonder if he ever did something with this life,
But i dont think of him much these days.
I dont have hope for him anymore.
And the other guy...
I wonder if he finally found a girl who didnt drive him to slit his wrists,
And it was a nice thought that it could be you,
and i hope he doesnt break your heart too.
There's a really sweet guy in him,
Who could make some girl really happy one day,
And i'd love to see him find her.
I don't know a lot of things,
I'm learning as i go,
But i do know one thing that my past has taught me:
No one deserves to sit around and wait for someone.
Those nights where you can't sleep
because you're waiting anxiously, patiently,
For him to come home...
There can be better spent with someone who really is coming.
Too many of those nights i've had,
And they can scar a person for a really long time.
Sometimes its better just to walk away,
Then to be caught up in those cat-and-mouse games.
I always said,
I think there is one person that our heart always goes back to,
And maybe for him, that person is the one whose house he has been at,
While you sit home and wait.
I watched him do that for years now,
Keep going back for another round of tears,
And he never could just walk away.
But you had a better person when he was just that good friend,
The one who always called you at work when he was in town,
Who was cool to hang out and drink a few beers with
But now he's not that guy anymore,
He's the one who forgets to call,
And doesn't come home when he says he's going to
And if you wait too long,
You won't get that other guy back.
People change
What hurts is when hearts change
But just remember your nights don't have to be spent waiting and wondering...
There's a whole world out there of people
Who won't forget to call...
You just need to go out there and find them.
The better part of my life started
When i walked away from that part you are stuck in now.
But only you know how you feel.
I'm here...
[ 14 January 2003: Message edited by: E-girl ]
 
E-Girl :
Your poetry is helping me to stop thinking about finding someone to fall in love with, I know the more you think about it the less of a chance you will have to get it and this poem oin particular really reminded me of how I spent a lot of years of my life. Waiting for that one perfect person to come through the door, but they often didn't, and there would be countless nights of restlessness and anxious stomach aches. It sucks that it takes your heart being broken to figure all this out but from reading your poetry I think you defintely have. I appreciate all your work, its beautiful.
Much Love & Respect
-Nik137
 
E-girl:
As soon as I saw, for jen.... walk away. i just started to cry. i read your post and cried through it the entire way. all day and night i waited for him to walk through the door, and to serve him beer. he never walked though. i got a call though, ya know. saying, i can't get home, i'm stuck here.
what am i to do, i don't have a car, and there's already so much fucking alcohol in me and it's not even 8.30 yet. 'ok, well just call me when you get home.' i tell him about the late bus, the one that leaves at 10.30. well he was breakin' the other night.... lost all his money. Everyone else is ass broke. he thought about walking, said he wouldn't make it. i think along the way, i'd give up too.
so i talk to him at 20 some minutes after 10. 'hey, call me back in a few, we are scraping up change so i can get the bus.' 'you'll never make it i said, but sure no problem.' 'ok, well if i'm not here i got on the bus.' 'if you aren't there when i call back, i'll meet you over at the terminal around 11.' i called back, it was busy. called back, it was busy. called back it was busy. it was 11.40. nothing. 11.45 my phone rings. hey girlie, whatcha doing. 'sitting here.' 'i'm in town, i caught the bus.' 'ok, you just want to walk down broad and meet me?' sure, give me a few.
and i took my time, no rush i thought. this whole weekend i spent rushing around, to have my heart broken. i'm sick of running in circles, and playing these fucking games. so i make a right onto broad and can't even bare to look up. don't want to see what lays ahead of me. i just can't do it. i don't want to do it.
i see you walking and instantly right there, i want to start crying. i fight them back this time though. i feel so humilated, i feel so, i don't know... why do you make me feel so icky inside? i can't even bare to look in your eyes.
'hey, i don't even get a kiss?' ...why do you want to kiss someone like me i thought.
'so i've been thinking i said, about things, and i don't think it's a good idea if we move to phila... ya know? so this means you are breaking up with me? yeah, yeah, i think that's what it means... i don't know. i don't really know much of anything these days.
'not trying to be a dick or sarcastic or anything here, but how much does this have to do with you talking to e-girl?"
'to do with e-girl', i thought... 'oh by the way, you have this record that she really wants, i gave her your mom's number. anyway, yeah we've been replying to one anothers posts lately and then just figured out who one another was. weird, huh? anyway, what did you say? what does this have to do with her?"
"oh nothing i guess, i was just talking to her today, right after i talked to you online and i was joking around with her.' told me what he said.
failed to mention a few parts. i knew the story. does this kid have no conscience? remembering that snowballing we talked about... yeah, it was starting to snow pretty hard. when's it going to stop, i thought.
had a great time when we got home. walked up those stairs, to my room. watched the tape i recorded the other night, drank beer, talked. marvelous. went to sleep eventually, together. woke up, together. thought to myself, why can't it just be like this. ...forever.
...talked a little more today, nothing solved, nothing accomplished. ...i'm waiting for that day. maybe, just maybe, for the day... that instead....... i just walk away.
And your piece was beautiful. i thank you very much.
 
Damn, girl...what you wrote sums up exactly what I'm going through right now. Thank you so much for posting it, it's nice to know I'm not the only one who has felt this sad.
 
hey you.,
I know you way to well, and when I hear you talk about Justin, it bothers me...I want him to stop.
Stop taking the pieces of your heart that you need to hold on too. And he was a great guy...but he was young.....and who could forget STUPID...but when you are happy...and he is alone..he will remember you...and what you were to him...and you were nothing but the best...and he took advantage of you every step of the way..
I saw this poem..at first I thought it was about me...and the again nothing breaks my heart more than what happen to us..we said we never let go..so did he...and sometimes I wonder if you even think about me..sometimes when I was down...all I ever wanted was good words from you..I felt so unimportant... like you didn't give a damn...and it's funny how life goes...your not here, but your memories will always remain..I don't know what it was about you..but you always had the ways to make me shine. Now, I don't feel so bright anymore..I feel unimportance of life..
And I tell you that when I said you will be somewhere someday you will.....when you find that person that you thought was "the one" and they leave you It hurt worse than any other feeling in the world...but you have no choice but to move on.....and you friends are what matter...your friends will be here through and through..and sometimes when you were down, I really did feel like there was no good advice I could give you. I guess yes, I got jealous that Bl was giving you advice and these people didn't know you as well as I did...but hey what are going to do.....
Tonite when I was out..Someone said to me, hey is Justin still with Jen, and I was like "what the fuck" "are you kiddin me"...but just think about what you have now..he is so much more than Justin will ever be....Justin did break you down...but Danny is here to build you up...up to a life you never had think about it...one day you be like "Justing smusutin" you won't even care anymore...but til then..be strong...I know you can..put on that fake smile that everyone loves...cause in the back ground I will be here holding up your ladder that you need to climb...but then again just like Justin...give it time...time will make you and me even stronger than we ever were...... you deserve it and I deserve it....but you will always be in my thoughts and prayers...
Love you.....jenners
 
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never think of you? didnt you get the email i sent you over new years? i was hurt you didn't write back. now i'm wondering if you got it...
i DO think about you.
 
sometimes, it just hard though. i mean, it's understandable what e-girl is trying to say, but she wrote that for me, because she has dealt with the same people that i'm dealing with right now. some are great, some are evil. and sometimes you just can't shake the idea that, this one special person is just worth so much better, and you just need to help him find that inside him. but he can't. and he ends up hurting you. and you continue to try, because you think you can open his eyes, and make him realize this. but yes, what happens is, a person can only take so much. and there's this transition period where you are inbetween saying i love you, or i fucking hate you. and you are just waiting for that one little push... the one that's either going to push you over the edge, of love or hate.
 
and there's this transition period where you are inbetween saying i love you, or i fucking hate you. and you are just waiting for that one little push... the one that's either going to push you over the edge, of love or hate.
you just put that so perfectly into words that i couldn't pass it up. well said. that's EXACTLY it.
 
e-girl:
i want to thank you again. even when i re-read this, i can't help but to get tears in my eyes.
and it's so wierd to think, that behind every single person, there's a past. and it usually hurts.
and i think i know what i need to do. it's just hard though, ya know. like when you are with someone and you still feel lonely.... then they are gone, you pushed them away, and you feel even lonlier. And at least before, you had someone to talk to... someone to put up with your bullshit, even when they didn't deserve it. And then maybe I put myself in his place.... and maybe this is 'his bullshit' that i am putting up with... even though i may not deserve it. or maybe i do... maybe it's his way of getting back at me for something i've done... for acting crazy. i know that, that girl has done things more severe and yet, i still can't get rid of this thought, that she still has what he needs. and it's so hard ya know...... because i didn't do anything, just trying to make myself happy and someone else..... and i end up feeling more sad, wonder if they even think about calling me on my birthday. and i dont' even want to go to work today, have all these strange people saying happy birthday, to me. what the fuck is so happy about it? and i'm sick of putting on that fake smile and saying thank you. ...making up lies when they ask me, 'what did you get?' no one wants to hear about broken hearts and broken promises.
Anyway this post you had written, really really means alot. And i thank you much for writing it once again.
 
my sig used to be a very good quote:
Don't settle for the person you can live with,
Wait for the person you cannot live without.
all i mean is... don't settle for someone just to have someone. sometimes waiting is long and lonely... but it usually pays off and saves you a lot of unnecessary heartache.
 
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