For it not be

[Robdob]

What has become?
Is it not just one week gone,
since I relinquished thought
to your peripheral beauty?
The portrait of a young rose has developed,
quivering, in sad yellow.
Crisp thorns have pierced threw
one thousand words
spewing forth
one thousand lies.
For it be that true beauty is so powerful
it may never be captured.
[This message has been edited by Robdob (edited 23 August 2001).]
[This message has been edited by Robdob (edited 24 August 2001).]
[This message has been edited by Robdob (edited 24 August 2001).]

 

[Robdob]

uhm... trying again

bump

 

[E-girl]

i agree with you, but i also believe that true beauty is something you cant see with your eyes, its something that must be felt from within.
you send a very powerful message here. thanks for making me think

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[lilygirl]

i love your symbolism. gorgeous piece.
~lil
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"you will get this chance but once, don't let simple shit get you down"
therapy is expensive, poppin bubble wrap is cheap. you decide.
sn~ sparkleylily