Flowers grow

[yakksoho]

Saw a bloody dove to-day
__can't say why I didn't cry,
Never said good-bye, o
Just closed his eyes and flew
Alive is such a simple thing
__layers of death so complex
__and fireflies and broken dreams
dark closed eyes so innocent.
O hows and whys so impassè
in speaking what the eyes can say
Forget the flight and all he knows
__is where in heaven flowers grow
__(your breath was rancid,
saccharine, the calloued hands across my skin)
and o; if there's one thing I remember;
__how to sing when murder falls,
Palpitations out withal in
silent screams a final song
Neverending; O, pretending
__lost dove calls are still unborn
__To undo the laces taught
across my skin; flight unending
All for naught, the flowers grow
__around you as, O
_____dark eyes close

(Still he knows
his epitaph, what joy remembers
If all of life is still beginning
neverending, where in heaven
_____-- did we dream of
_____Death's surrender --
As the flight from heaven
Falls).

 

[RareForm]

i am sick. with a very high fever. it's 8:00 in the a.m. and i can't sleep because of my migraine. but i can't really able myself to leave this without commenting, you have the most prominent and definitive style, and i'm thoroughly moved by the words, the words are so perfect. how do you come up with this stuff?

"Forget the flight and all he knows
__is where in heaven flowers grow"

this piece is so touching.

 

[(Wordy)]

Breathtaking as always.

 

[EllaDesbals]

Yes, I like this very much.

 

[yakksoho]

rare:
the answer is too simple to seem real but so it goes
birds give these words to me
(i had a pigeon once, he told me why birds fly
it is because of all the songs they give to each other
singing keeps them in the sky)

 

[Psychedelics_r_best]

I hail thee a real poet.