Faker

[breakyaself]

I considered your closed mindedness
How could you expect me to be anything but
What, with your big mouth and book of ethics?
every minute

Seductively

Kill Kill
My lips today
hush that sorry kiss away

That way you caress ?
Ill love every minute

That way you judge ?
I fake it if you win it

 

[(Wordy)]

I like this. It's rhyming, rhythmic... and rasping!

 

[Raz]

Kill Kill
My lips today
hush that sorry kiss away

That way you caress ?
Ill love every minute

This would be an awesome song.

 

[doofqueen]

nice work!

 

[Benefit]

Is this about me? This is about me isn't it? If this is about me, you can tell me. Why would you write this about me??

 

[Mary Poppins]

short, sweet and to the point.

the way i like my poetry

 

[Helios.]

I like the Camus quote, but not free verse.

 

[knight_marshall]

I agree with Raz... it could work so well to music.

Not that I don't like it anyway

 

[(Wordy)]

I like the Camus quote, but not free verse.

Oh really? Free verse?

Not sure what you're trying to say exactly, but it's probably best that you read the forum guidelines anyway. They're high in fibre:

http://www.bluelight.ru/vb/showthread.php?t=257005