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F*** YOU!

5FACES

Bluelighter
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Why did you pick me up in your arms, cradle me and let me cry only to say that tears are for the weak?
Now you're the one crying you IGNORANT FOOL.
But why do you still look me in my eyes but only speak silent words that drop from your mouth as careless as a summer day?
You loved me, don't deny it, you still do,
and I hope everytime you hear my simple name it feels like a knife twisting in your back. producing all the pain you poured down on me.
now that I left, ran so far away,
my smiling face in pictures brings you down to your knees drowning in all my tears that I cried for you,
your fucked up life,
your mistakes,
your ruins.
Did you even once stop to think I'd be the one you'd miss?
Not me missing you,
So why look at me with eyes of yesterday,
LIFE IS NOT A GAME,
and you are not the controller of me.
A bruised heart never forgets the blood shed of so many years of hurt.
Misery of your hate filled words,
Your arrogant lies.
You know I was your SAVIOR,
but I'm gone now,
So I'll laugh in your face,
while you fall, broken to your defeat.
LEAVE ME ALONE,
STAY OUT my life.
You were my depression, my failure, my fault for being so damn naive and staying.
But i left so
FUCK YOU!
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...
 
Powerful.
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"How the fuck do you feellllll?"
AIM ~ FutureAeons
 
aaaaaaaaaamen.
Ry.
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"Euphoric, narcotic, pleasantly hallucinant."
 
I have soo felt this too. I have soo been there.
Props to you yo'!
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nice work. very emotional, powerful words. i've been there too, unfortunately.
 
that was amazing im still feeling all that from my last failed attempt at love and i dont know if those feelings will ever go away but i think all the hurt helps to mold you into the person u r meant to be in the end i dont know wat else to say but i feel ya ..... i definetly feel ya
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im gonna walk through the halls playing wow shes dumb by homegrown and the first girl that approaches me and says shes not dumb im gonna prapose to.....on the spot.....yay
 
THANKS FOR ALL THE REPLIES!! I WROTE THIS POEM IN A FIT OF ANGER AND I FELT SO RELIEVED AFTER I WAS DONE! SOMETIMES WRITING IS LIKE A DRUG
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...
 
writing can completely be like a drug...i love what u wrote, it made me cry....okay sorry everything makes me cry. just .....ROCK ON
 
i think writing can be MORE than a drug (though very similiar to a drug in the fact that writing can be very addicting, too!). its nice to be able to let out all of your emotions through art.
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good work
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Mella
[This message has been edited by Mellabopper (edited 15 October 2001).]
 
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