Entreprenuer

[Robdob]

This is my freestyles. No editing, straight from my mouth to the screen, be nice
here we go...
I explode lyrics like a volcano
clogging up your mind your gonna need some Drano
stuck in the pipes you aren't going anywhere
stuck in the pipes you go through life with out a care
Stare all you want and think about the day
when you will grow up anbd have something inportant to say, I'm okay.
well, I don't play. I make life out of everysingle day.
Gain knowledge, and expand like a vacuum, take everything that is and store it my cerebrum... cortex
Now I've put you in a hex, captivated by my dialects, you do what I expect. Rejected by your own inhibitions, you lack the ability to make your own decisions, you follow some elses visions. Divisions in population, the working hard and the elite, it all comes down to standing on your own two feet. Some think that they do, but I can see right through, the curtain, and I see how all of you are hurting, with strings threw your hands, developing some one elses plan so they may expand
and leave you with what? A high self worth? I guess you got THEM there...

 

[Noodle]

*BRAVO, BRAVO*
This sentiment echos from within me. Really!...nice play on--and with--words.
I think your pieces are always worth more than a single read, as they are filled with many clever and often accurate assessments and observations.
Hot topic too, by the way!...leaves me thinking about all that is Capitalism as an economic and social system that soo many of us are born and then fall into, almost blindly.

 

[C Divinity]

Good shit, i really enjoyed that!

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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard...

 

[Robdob]

Thanks Noodle and C Divinity! It means a lot to me to get feed back on my posts.