Endless Abyss

[Squirt]

A tear fell to the bottom of the abyss.
Black and empty they both were.
She stood at the bottom of the hole,
Looking up, straining her eyes,
Trying to see to whom it belonged.
She saw no one.
She picked the tear up,
Held the pain in her hands,
The hurt,
sorrow, emptiness,
grief, pity,
sadness;
As it all absorbed into her weak body,
Her neck snapped back in the same
Agony that produced the tear,
And she shed her own.
It fell to the bottom of another
Black, empty abyss, where
Another girl picked it up and absorbed
The hurt,
sorrow, emptiness,
grief, pity,
sadness;
Will the cycle of agony ever end?

 

[eidolon]

The cycle of agony will end...eventually. I like it.
Almost had my own tear streak down the side of mu cheek

luv ay Squirt.
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-=r a n d y=-

 

[Crow]

Good poem Squirt. Sometimes the best therapy is to write what your feeling down. Keep it going.
Love yah girl,
Crow
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"One pill and nothing was ever the same."
Irvine Welsh
"We are what we have lost"

 

[Noodle]

I'll miss you squirt.
I really liked your contribution, your words up on the screen