En Verite

[RareForm]

Oh, I sympathize with that you say:
This is the only time I'm permitted!
But it is too apparent that no remuneration
whatsoever could be sufficient to
your genius, your knowledge, your industry.

I am sure there is a super power that will
recompense you and that your own virtue will be,
as it already is, your finest reward.

. . . si Dieu n'existant pas, il faudrait l'inventer

 

[SouthernChildGal]

Hey RareForm. I am new and already I am enjoying your writing.

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

He boy! Great write. I am sensing that you are not the same happy boy I once knew. I am sorry that things are not going to rainbow for ya. I miss you. And to ". . si Dieu n'existant pas, il faudrait l'inventer" well God does exist. So why try in invent something that may not make sense...just kidding.
Love ya bro
J.Love

 

[fruitfly]

A man who knows his Voltaire!

 

[Suki_Nova]

*nods*

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Read this the other night at the house, very nice

 

[bingey]

It's "si dieu n'existait pas" not "existaNt"

Know your voltaire or know your french

 

[RareForm]

excuse me, been a while since i've spoken french 8)

 

[mariacallas]

NIce!!!! short and sweet...i think im inspired to write some now

 

[cherub]

ohhhhhh speak french to me baby hehehe

actually i thought this was quite good short and very romantic tone but not romantic,,, how do you manage that ?

excecellent !!!

( COUNTING)

 

[RareForm]

^8 right?

I would attribute my writing to whomever is holding the sandman hostage, on my nights.

 

[cherub]

8 is correct,,,,,, sandman,,, and you having alittle problems lately hehe, great stuff anyhow !

 

[Aesthete]

This is very short & sharp and I enjoyed it. I guess that's why you're the moderator and I'm the...words...talkin'...guy...

 

[mealltach]

interesting piece rf. i'd love to know where this one came from (i mean, within you) because i find it palpable. i'm not going to say why because i try not to say "i can relate because yadda yadda" and not give any actual feedback on the piece itself.

no offence to the folks who do that, hehe.

so yeah, from where did the inspiration for this one arise, if you don't mind me asking?

oh, and good work hun.

 

[spinkle]

nice work

 

[RareForm]

mealltach:

I don't know, it was initially writte with a kind of sarcastic bitterness to it, but after writing it, i saw how it could be interpreted in many ways, so I guess that's just the side of it you related.

 

[silverwheel]

I enjoyed drinking its language. It wrapped around me and drew me into several readings; I could find drastically different colors on each.

 

[Pantomime7]

Short but precise. I love your words; how they bleed into each other. And oh yeah...I miss ya bro! Great write.