eleven

[Chaotic Action Man]

i woke up in the middle of a dream, wrote this down in my dream journal, and then went back to sleep. i have no idea what the dream was about, and i really can't remember any details, but i thought this was a cool keep sake

one person
two paths
three lives
four for direction
toward five futures
where six golden rays
light seven mirrored entrances
guarded by eight silent slaves
nine is their master
with ten open eyes eternally fixed
holding the vision a doubled one
in pain

 

[TiberCross]

i can't believe this slipped by me. oh well, now i know and knowing is half the battle,....or something.*shakes head slowly back and forth*i don't konw what the hell i'm talking about. i'm really stoned in a public library. i just read your piece and i really like the dark undertones. it's very cool actually like reading down a tunnel that's closing up quickly.
nice. sweet. sweeet.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I read your other stuff and loved it so I come back to find other pieces by you and I happen to stumbel upon this little snippet. I really enjoyed this and loved teh way it was written. Very Nice