el negitivo

[kidblue]

I cant believe this could be I cant believe this is the
I cant I’m fallen with, I can’t stand
Here I am again
Sick I can’t breath I quit
Don’t I’m not gonna
I can’t believe she
I can’t see past it where
Through, over, under, can’t get back up
Towards air but sometimes I think
I'ts possible to breath water
Only I keep drowing and
Going through Hell every
Single
Time

 

[fizzygirl]

this gives the sense of constantly being interrupted, like moving towards a thought or feeling but finding something always in your path or pushing you back...
very nice

 

[kidblue]

word....
i jus wrote it, and I don't always understand the full meaning of what i wrote when i wrote it, but your reply helped.....wierd ,,,,thanks