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up all night

up all night

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I could talk about how cold it is this winter
and then somehow relate it to the freezing of the soul
or a cold shoulder
or a cold heart.

But I won’t.

Angst angst angst bite the hand that’s fed the heart of tortured souls the world over
then drown yourself in puddles of words that have all been said before.

I could talk about how I’m slipping through cracks of my own making
Because my life is going in circles due to inactivity
and inattention
ans inappropriate behaviour.

But I won’t.

Boredom boredom boredom everyone is bored when you sit alone in your room
And analyse every single passing moment until breathing becomes a chore.

I could talk about that love lost last night
Like 16 year old girls who make song dedications to boys who forgot their name
who forgot their number
who forgot they were supposed to care.

But I won’t.

Cliché, cliché, cliché is the only think we’ll ever be when your story
Is my story and it really isn’t all that interesting anyway.
 
up all night said:

I could talk about how I’m slipping through cracks of my own making
Because my life is going in circles due to inactivity
and inattention
ans inappropriate behaviour.

But I won’t.
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youre your own worst enemy girl. and im mine. and we both know it. disheartening how the longer you let it go on the harder it seems to try and get out of it. or maybe its too hard already. we'd know if we really tried.
 
Boredom boredom boredom everyone is bored when you sit alone in your room
And analyse every single passing moment until breathing becomes a chore.
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Quite a mission just living - then we still have to manage other people on top of it too :/

Been here lots of times, you're not alone!
 
up all night said:
Angst angst angst bite the hand that’s fed the heart of tortured souls the world over
then drown yourself in puddles of words that have all been said before.

I could talk about how I’m slipping through cracks of my own making
Because my life is going in circles due to inactivity
and inattention
ans inappropriate behaviour.
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damn, this is so terrific, i couldn't possibly say using words: this is such a great paragraph right here too:
 
Definately a clever one of yours even if we have to face the awful truth about ourselves. It is what keeps us going to better then we are now.

excellent stuff girl ! :)
 
<3

Originally posted by up all night
I could talk about that love lost last night
Like 16 year old girls who make song dedications to boys who forgot their name
who forgot their number
who forgot they were supposed to care.

^This was hard to digest.
Like it's sitting in my mouth like some dead weight, and my mouth is lifting and closing, instead of chewing, hoping your words will choke me and end this torment.

Your pieces bring out a similar response each time I discover them.
I feel perverted.
I love to read them, yet it feels as if they're gently lifting scabs from my knees.

Wonderful work. <3 for you. Always. :|
 
up all night said:

I could talk about how I’m slipping through cracks of my own making
Because my life is going in circles due to inactivity
and inattention
ans inappropriate behaviour.

*~*~*~*

And analyse every single passing moment until breathing becomes a chore.
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You've got such a distinct style, I'm sure I could read your work without your name to it and know exactly where it came from.

This was clever, and as always, I relate.

=D
 
up all night said:

I could talk about that love lost last night
Like 16 year old girls who make song dedications to boys who forgot their name
who forgot their number
who forgot they were supposed to care.
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That was my favorite part... I really liked the whole thing though.. amazing work..
 
You're such a good writer sweetie, your an intelligent person, you are just so damned critical of yourself.

I dont know what to say thats not alreayd been said, i love everything you write, and i cant wait to read more, i just want you to find that thing SOON that captures you so you arent as lost, cuz it saddens me! >3 >3 >3 >3 >3 >3

we should catch up! been a while since i see ya pretty face!
 
was thinking of you today babe, and i hoped that something made you smile today. even if only to capture you for a moment :)

i just want you to find that thing SOON that captures you so you arent as lost, cuz it saddens me!
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UANight: i know these only seem like words over the net and as you said internet hugs are lame ;) but thats all i can offer from sitting here. i wish i was there to take you out for a coffee or beer...some day i will and we can lay in the gutter together :)


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i really love this piece! it's got metapoetic touch to it that i find really refreshing. good job.
 
You guys make me smile. Lots. <3

Kat you're right. I think part of the reason i'm so frustrated with myself at the moment is because I'm always dealing with the same issues about the same subjects and coming to the same boring conclusions.

I want to feel inspired.
 
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