Early Fall

[Capt. ChickenBone]

Early Fall
No longer like some
vacationing tourist
hanging out of
hawaiin shirt and khaki shorts
baseball cap and sandals
shimmering glimmering gaudy
too loose and too loud
and all too overdone
Nature,
is done up again
quiet and understated
colours co-ordinated
confident and cool
chic once again.

 

[MDMA desciple]

very "frostian" i like it. good use of metaphor.

 

[up all night]

Very nice.