druunk as hell, if this sucks tomorrow i'll remove it

[sunflash876]

to the girl, my infatuation
you bring me so much satisfaction
when i talk to you i get nervous
and i've known you for two years
leaving you still brings me to tears
every night i wish time to fly by
and i see you, i see why
the wait was totally worth it
or as it was
these days it's nothing but fuzz
our relationship has turned to hate
has god made this our fate?
I'm irate
we had something so wonderful
and now you treat me like a tool
now you've turned me forever
because of you love, i'll never
i've said to hell with it
throw your little fit
bitch
I hate you and everything you've created
and now you and your life i've hated
my hate for you is undebated
like i've already stated
get the fuck away from me
without you i'm free
passing that era of hate
it really was fate
that we were meant to be, everyone has it
and that being said you still won my heart
and we've had our up and down part
because of you darling, i'm strong
and never once were you wrong
maybe this has gotten too long
maybe i'm just drunk and happy
and one day maybe..just maybe
i'll drop those words
baby will you be mine? forever and always
until our hearts stop beating
until my words stop speaking
until my body gives out on me
and then baby we can be
In love.

 

[lostNfound]

some of us write our best pieces when drunk!

i know i do!

this is not delete worthy if thats any consolation, p.s i like the word consolation.

got a little soppy in the end, but overall, i liked the way it rolled off the tongue as i read it.

 

[DzNutz]

wow

 

[TheDeceased]

I liked this quite a bit, especially considering that it was written while drunk. Nice work.

 

[up all night]

I like that it was such a rollercoaster of emotion, which is exactly how we think when we're drunk, and also how we sometimes think when we're in a relationship. It's like a really condensed written form of long term relationship (with added liquor!)