The Dreamplane Vedas: Volume I of Avatar
The site is shabby, but has a sample from the novel I finished recently. I would really welcome critique and comments as this part of the book needs to be the best it can be.
Pure
From what I've read so far, it's very reminiscent of Ridley Scott's Bladerunner - Very Brave New World. I like it!
I can see this as being similar to the above texts in that it seems like a warning to humanity of the consequences of their greed. I like that the character of David seems so haughty, but in the same instance there is a child-like innocence about him....
I loved the descriptive prologue, very evocative and sensous
