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Dont stutter with life

mashead testing

Bluelighter
Joined
Mar 18, 2001
Messages
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You
see
what
your
eyes
want
you
to
but
you
will
never
see
what
I
see
in
you
I
see
what
your
eyes
do
too
but
I
will
never
feel
you
We
can
only
start
to
believe
in
what
we
are
coming
to
I
dont
know
if
its
time
for
me
to
break
in
two
Apart
from
lacking
where
I
have
been
loving
in
the
end
its
still
true
For
so
long
I
have
counted
on
living
like
this
I
dont
know
what
it
is
I
will
miss
But
the
sun
doesnt
shine
here
anymore
Your
soul
stoppped
delivering
the
goods
and
I
think
its
the
end.
 
wow.
I really liked this! Your word express what I've felt so many times yet the way it is presented add the drama behind those feelings. You seem to have captured the entire emotional experience I think so many of us have felt at some point in our life. It's beautiful.
 
WoW...This was very dramatic...but very well written. I feel your pain as I am in a situation like this right now. Wish I could have written it as good as you.
Keep up the good work
PLUR
Utopia
 
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