Don't I Know YOU?

[Guh Low]

you were sitting there
a smile on your lips
the soft light glowing on your skin
and i saw it
i looked into that shining sparkle
and for a moment i was lost
you were singing
your words echoed how you felt
your voice drifiting through the air
and i heard it
The sky was turning and the leaves were upside down
and for a moment i was lost
You turned and looked right through me
the space, it could not care
You touched me with your breath
and i felt it
The water was warm and gentle
and for a moment i was found

 

[Jungle Bunny]

WELL....
the ending was abrupt...actually it felt a little like a three car pile up in my head- giggle. But check it babes I really did like the usage of italaic phrases to show distinction in mental thought and narration. VERY SLICK!

 

[nephil]

very nice