Does it ever end?

[frostyangel]

Countless hours..
of not understanding.

How these circles
kept going around
with out an ending.

But we kept going..
reaching for some
kind of reasons..

Dealing with every
thing that we don't
want too.

We all need and
want some kind of
a break to take
our minds away,
from all the
weight that
breaks our
shoulders..

I dream those
heart filled notions
that has become full
of nothing

but I have to find
stronger devotion,
to keep all these
wheels turning.

In my years to show
most minds won't know
the ultimate sacrifice
that we give up for
ourselves

And there is this certain
craziness that built a
reoccurring absence within
our hearts

Why is it that we can't
find a void to build
a wall to make us only
revolve around happiness

you search of words of
which to speak

I've been through heartache.
I've been through pain.
I know one day again I'll
start to feel once again sane.

Sometimes, when the heart
gets low, and you feel like
there is nowhere to go..
You never let all of your
emotions show.

An emptiness rides the tides
in the dark days light, and
we feel like giving up the
fight..

Wishing the sun would make
those clouds go away.

Especially the days you
wonder does it ever end?

 

[RareForm]

very good, kind of started out slow in the beginning but from there this was an awesome poem...:D

 

[neverwas]

*waves* hope u settled in ok

Especially the days you
wonder does it ever end?

dam you girl for makin me think

does it ever end? i hop enot...cause then things would get dull.

 

[Rollingrrl]

does it ever end? sometimes we wish for the end but then we'd not get to read the next chapter in the book. I rambling again. just made me think.

nice work!