does anybody know

[grey kat]

Does anybody know
that feeling?
When you just want to cry.
Nothing is really wrong,
no one really hurt you,
and you don't really understand
why your pillow is calling your name
to lay your head down and cry.
You want to express just how much you love him
and that your salvation is his arms.
That the green of the flowers gets automatically brighter
and the trees don't hunch over with fear,
that the sound of his voice breaks the silence
and the touch of his lips brings tears to your eyes.
That his beauty makes you thank Aphrodite
and his genius shies you away,
but the thing that makes you cry is the worst of them all
he's not here and you seem lost in your world.
You become a puppet of their orders;
your mind looses its thoughts.
The simplicity of everything
turns the world to black and white,
and the shadows of intrigue
are gone.
The world is left like a medieval painting,
in shades of brown and gold,
which shows no empathy,
just facts that are dying flowers.
You want to cry because you don't understand
why.

 

[Cat Again]

i know

 

[grey kat]

we are in lovers, but we happen to live about 2 hours away. If you do not wish to read what we say about each others work, then the answer is very simple, don't read it. If you're going to comment, then base it on the poem or whatever the original post is, what difference does it make to you what others say about my poem?

 

[neverwas]

^^^ ur a lil odd 8)

quite a few people who know each other or are 'involved' with each other post peices in here meant for others or their other half to read. i find personal peices are the best. and gvcing each other praise is a good thing not something to be critised bout.

i really liked this peice and i really liked the way it reached me.

ncie work.

 

[grey kat]

thank you star, i really appreciate your response. As for souny, if you don't like our comments to each other, don't read them

 

[frostyangel]

I kinda agree with star.. maybe you guys could write more then one or two words.. but I think it's good to be boosting each other's work up.. but just make sure you do it with others too.. And I definitely like your work!!!