dizzy (short and sweet)

[yoUr bLiSS]

stumbling
misdirected
off-balance
sporadic patterns
of
highs
and
lows
i twist and whirl
and
grasp
frantically
reaching
for equilibrium
only to be told
by ignorant strangers
passing by
that i am
such a lovely
dancer
[ 28 December 2001: Message edited by: yoUr bLiSS ]

 

[harraser]

as always you make me smile nice work

 

[Tarsarlan]

Yup agreed, nice work