Disconnect

[plazma]

I'm struggling
To pull the plug
Or disconnect
Self from soul
And yet I'm
Still slipping
Looking every way
But downwards
Till the sun rises
On the end of time
I'd be scrabbling
Clawing with
Desperation born
Of some unkind
Or lonely impulse
Fighting vertigo
As the wind whips
Past and upwards
Till mercy stops
And silence reigns
In the absence
Of a heartbeat
I can feel you
Bringing me life
Or the courage
To let go
The air soft as
A kiss on the cheek
While grip loosens
And I fall

-plaz out-

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Such a vivid way to describe something, one of the finest writers in this forum!

 

[cherub]

pure unadulterated romance it seems come from this... lovely words darlin

 

[Mary Poppins]

your writing stuns me into silent appreciation.

you make things flow just so.

bellissimo

 

[oceandreams]

Beautuiful

 

[Cosmic Mist]

Wow... simply stunning.

 

[katmeow]

You make the task of writing beautifully seem so effortless. Amazing

I'm so glad you've started writing again.

xx

 

[up all night]

Your words never stop for breath. It's good, it works and it makes them unmistakeably yours.