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Didn't anyone ever tell you little girl?

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mmmmSeXyE

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ohio. yeah, shut up.
I keep writing
but you aren't worth my words
I keep on fighting
but my battle is for an image
I created in my own mind
just a glorified figment of
my imagination
my hope
of what I wanted him to be
you are only
present in my dreams
and absent in my awakening
my thoughts held you in the highest
I thought I was held there too
what I need is a good defense
a defense against you
they all say
didn't anyone ever tell you little girl?
you'll be given love
you'll be taken care of
but be careful
true love can define
or destroy your world
I watch mine crumble
because you aren't half
of what I'd thought you'd be
tears well up in my eyes
my distorted vision of you
I can no longer see
and it's time I realize
true love waits,
just not for me.
[ 01 February 2002: Message edited by: mmmmSeXyE ]
 
and it's time I realize
true love waits,
just not for me.
just how I feel....the person you feel is just right for you never is,its always an illusion.
I liked the Bjork reference too :)
that personll be out there somewhere and youll find them when you least expect it, at least thats what I try to tell myself.
nice work
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i dont think im in any position to comment on the subject of that poem,
but you are extremely talented when it comes to writing, among other things.
ive made a habbit of reminding myself, breaking becomes an act of strength.
 
*ouch* you could have wrote this about my life and some tall boy i've wasted so many words on...his true self really disappointed me...yet for some reason he still lingers....
beautiful words....
 
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[ 02 February 2002: Message edited by: Mellabopper ]
 
i think everyone from ohio needs a hug...or tickets to the jerry springer show.
lol...im seriously just kidding.
that aside, very good words.
and someday something wonderful will happen, and it'll be true love.
i promise.
at least, thats what people keep telling me (?)
:)
 
I keep on fighting
but my battle is for an image
I created in my own mind
i think we all do that. i know i have. its like, you fall in love with this person, and then you find out they really arent as wonderful as you thought they were... but you continue to love this perfect vision of them that you carry in your head. you dont want to admit or to believe that your image is not real. and after a while, it gets very hard to come to terms with the fact that you are in love with someone who doesnt even exist.
i've been there sweetie. but someday, someone will come along who is all those things you envisioned, but for real.
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sorry i'm just not jumping for joy, people. and erin.. you gave me the url to look at this to show me what you thought of me, so i guess i made an incorrect assumption eh?
just exit gracefully. stop sending mean spirited e-mails and dropping little comments in your lj about subjects you'll never understand, then we can be friends.
Ry.
 
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