dharma

[Negative]

you can't understand
the depths of depravity
how we all tumble down
the pull of gravity
the fall of man
descent into fire
i can't hear a sound
bogged in the mire
ecstatic heights
bring depressive lows
balanced emotion
accidental prose
offset wrong from right
cycle escaped
personal devotion
consciousness shaped

 

[AlphaCharlieID]

i like it

 

[katmeow]

Nice flow... I like the way you've put this together

 

[(Wordy)]

Yeah, me too... I like the short stabbing lines, and the way it comes together at the end:

balanced emotion
accidental prose
offset wrong from right
cycle escaped
personal devotion
consciousness shaped

 

[mariacallas]

So perfect baby I love reading this over and over again

 

[katmeow]

RIP dude. I didn't know you apart from your posts in words but it's so sad to see BL lose another one of our own.

 

[(Wordy)]

Like Kat said, this is so, so sad... the loss of such a creative soul.

Rest in peace, Negative...