Demon

[drug_wench]

quite similar to anything else ive ever written really......but im in a much more sober state than any of the others i wrote 8)

A DEMON CLAWS YOUR SOUL WITHIN
SHE LEAVES YOU SCARRED AND PAPER-THIN
AND TAKES AWAY YOUR PRECIOUS LIFE
THEN CUTS YOU WITH HER SHARPEST KNIFE

ALL THE WHILE YOU THINK YOUR'E FLYING
LISTEN CLOSE - YOUR SOUL IS CRYING
THE DEMON TREATS YOU LIKE HER SLAVE
THE DEMON WANTS YOU IN YOUR GRAVE

CAN'T YOU SEE YOU'RE WALKING DEATH?
YOUR ONLY FRIEND IS CRYSTAL METH
WITH FRIENDS LIKE HER, I'M SAD TO SAY
YOUR FOES ARE BETTER ANYDAY

YOU ONCE WERE GORGEOUS, HEALTHY, SMART
YOU HAD A SPIRIT AND A HEART
NOW YOU'VE JOINED THE DEMON'S FIGHT
AND ALL BEAUSE YOU TRIED THAT PIPE.....

 

[Amanita Mary]

meth and alcohol in my opinion are the two most ravaging... ive seen a lot of friends and people around me decay because of them. I like this poem; it cries out... it's a realization. congrats on the sober state of mind, i wish you the best in the fight

 

[(Wordy)]

Well said, and well rhymed.

And like Amanita Mary said, good luck in the fight. From what I've seen, meth can be a tough, tough adversary.

 

[New]

That was jarring, scary, and I happened to imagine a scratchy voice reading the poem...

Nice.

 

[JuicyJay]

I really like it. Sounds like you've had some experience to write that.

 

[drug_wench]

thanks.....im glad u guys enjoyed it
yea, little too much experience....