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drea

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I've been swallowing my pride for
Two plus years
I've been smiling in the thunderstorms
For post twenty.
I've been reacting to you softly,
One year, a few weeks, and a scattered minute.
With arms airborne, saluting the sky with the pride of a deity,
I can pretend
I've got the backing to take this,
One more goddess spurned by the fire,
To make great stories,
Swear by the holiness of her pure love
And release her sanctity to the sharks below.
And strangely,
Everytime,
An acquisition of one more scar,
One more burn on a meandering lip,
Seems I leaned to closely,
Kissed that fire
An innocent bite of my side,
And you always fail to recognize the power of your jaws
A blood drop on a tear filled palm
Mingling pink,
Like the cheek blush you so commonly impart
To hopeful eyes and scarred hands
Mingling foolishly
Like a clumsy paw under carpets of night
Stomachache arrives, and I cannot swallow this day
Not again, not with this sunlight
Never before has it been such an unwelcome intrusion,
Casting a ray of reality onto those parts
You aren’t ever quite ready to see
My sunglass shield,
We hide till night,
Dressed iron-clad, imprisoned with
This unstoppable pseudo-divinity
I take this pride, and I
Take
It
Down
Never a deity, surely a girl
One foolish imagination,
Trying to hide the light, hide your face
 
I have been reading your poems for about a year now and you always amaze me. This one like most of your poems seems to be addressing a former lover/friend/significant other. You have read my mind and have translated my thoughts to words more beautiful, succinct and poetic than i could hope to. Thank you......
TS
 
oh wow...this is amazing.
To make great stories,
Swear by the holiness of her pure love
And release her sanctity to the sharks below.
And strangely,
Everytime,
An acquisition of one more scar,
One more burn on a meandering lip,
Seems I leaned to closely,
Kissed that fire
An innocent bite of my side,
And you always fail to recognize the power of your jaws
There is such beauty in your writing. I don't think I've ever read anything better describing the situation I've quoted....and there have been many many poems on similar themes.
Truly touching and perfectly written. Thank you for this. :)
 
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