Deep Down Inside

[shroomco877]

Already you've caused me so much pain,
I don't know how much longer
I can go on living this way.
You expect me to be emotionless and unattatched-
Deep down inside I know what's right,
Deep dpwn inside you're killing me.
Each word is like a knife-
Stabbing at my open wounds.
Each look is like a gun-
Opening fire.
Deep dpwn inside you're hurting me,
Deep down inside I'm dying.
I hate for the times when we're alone.
You think it's fun to hurt me-
YOu laugh when I cry and tare up my soul.
I shut my eyes-
It's not happening.
But deep down inside- I feel you.
What happened to you to make you so sick?
Can't you just see you're destroying me?
You control every aspect of my life-
You've stolen it away,
It's not mine anymore-
A sick fantasy world- Just a game.
But it's not fun.
I'm not laughing anymore.
You've ripped out my heart,
Played with my head,
And deep down inside I'm dying.
Sorry about this...it isn't really a poem, just some feelings that I had to get out about a situation I was in when I was younger. Hope it wasn't too bad...
PLUR
Utopia

 

[GoingStRaNgE]

i think plain feelings are indeed poetry, and this is very poetic.
it's bad to be hurt. and we all feel it, wether from lovers, family, friends, or strangers... people seem to have an amazing power over our hearts, dont they?
keep it up
straaange