"Death by Alzheimers"

[youarewhatyouis]

I am driven by a psychotic form of wanderlust
Relentlessy barking orders at me
All day and all night
Cruelly tricking me believing that I am a future world traveler
A bohemian playboy, an artist with a tortured soul
This rotten brain of mine
Is all that I have left

 

[SpellmanT7]

and if you knew. . .

 

[wastedwalrus]

Pretty good. Some grammar you might want to look at: "Cruelly tricking me believing[...]" (cruelly tricking me into believing). Also, did you intend for the poem to be enjambment or was punctuation (with the exception of the comma) left out inadvertantly?

 

[colicolo]

believing that I am a future world traveler
... an artist with a tortured soul

awesome

 

[youarewhatyouis]

thanks guys.... I almost forgot about this one.

I wrote it the week before I dropped my dope habit, and I left the punctuation out on purpose.