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Dagny

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She'll hit rewind until time agrees to pause.
give me that god-damned moment in a shining, silver frame
and hold it still....... just
there.
Please why won't you let me
dwell in a warm-strung cocoon.
that gives me vivid sense of how jasmine smells
When I can be bothered to think

of reality like that.
She's on the floor. Only you see the stain next to her.
It's surface does not reflect her moment.
I AM NOT BLIND
to this cause (built of selfish chaos and tranquility).
Nor to it's descending spiral
pointing a finger at
all those times
I fucked with time, and well
she kept a tally.
Her score

is composed with bittersweet violins.
Made of wind and spruce. She once heard their music differently.
I am deaf to a Queen;
Mab exiled to an abandoned theatre
with me left watching a
blank screen.
Scream.
I did, and a moment washed away
in a river

that had, floating, a fake-wood boat;
An amusement park ride.
Watch as her gaze sweeps over and beyond boundaries
she fathoms as metaphor.
A neon sign?
"Fast Forward" and death is it's light for
a moment does not pause until
memory is born.


I come back from dreams
to find a field of jasmine.
 
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i always get swept up in your words...

this was maybe something i needed really badly this morning, when every other word i read in my day made me breath deeply, sigh, or choke back a tear. i needed to be reminded of certain things, things i took from this that are probably not what YOU intended when you wrote them, but that brought some meaning to me, when nothing else could.

and so as always... thank you.

and thank you for every reply i read by you today. your wisdom never fails to give me hope.
 
as always well written, you have always had a flare for thought process and letting people feel what you write.

missy I miss that about you most,, in person glad i can catch a glimpse of that here!
 
For someone who has always preferred the company of male friends -

I am blessed by the amazing women in my life. Thank you all for your love, and more importantly for your respect; one is a reason for living but the other is a reason for living OUT LOUD.
 
i felt like i was escorted from daydreams of my own to be with you for that piece.

thanks for the ride

:)
 
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